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January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope that one day you will come back here and do a sequel like you promise. I hate it when people say they will be continuing their stories but end up not doing it instead. Just leave us reviewer's/readers disappointed.
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January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo. I love it. Its well written and passionant and loving.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pls pls do da sequel 2 dis soon
i love dis story
i love dis story
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and really really really really want to read a sequal. are you still planning on writing one? if you do please please please let me know! i hope you do!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked your story very much, and a sequel is a great idea - I really want to see Harry taking controll of the order from Dumbledore.
I\'m just begging you to fix one thing - it gave me an eeewww feeling in the middle of the guys\' sex: \"Harry was tight and hot and so ***wet***, that he wanted to slide himself deep within him that instant.\" Guys aren\'t wet there when they are aroused. Now, if they have bowel and colon problems, then it could be \"wet\". See? Eeewww... Plese fix it!
I\'m just begging you to fix one thing - it gave me an eeewww feeling in the middle of the guys\' sex: \"Harry was tight and hot and so ***wet***, that he wanted to slide himself deep within him that instant.\" Guys aren\'t wet there when they are aroused. Now, if they have bowel and colon problems, then it could be \"wet\". See? Eeewww... Plese fix it!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your fanfiction. I\'m looking forward for the sequel. Hope to read it soon.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gripping! Well-done and executed. I do appreciate the portrayal of Dumbledore... He does get creepier and more manipulative as time progresses...So... Lay on, MacDuff and lead us to the sequel!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was excellent! I really liked the way Harry through the order out of his house! Will definetly be watching out for the sequel!!!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I\'m REALLY curious about that info. I can\'t wait for the sequel!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god damn that was goo
please continue it
please continue it