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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm, i'd really like to see where this is going, but i noticed you haven't updated in a while. that makes me sad. :( *sigh* please come back to the story. i'd really appreciate it! oh, and if rachelw would go back to her story also... then i'd be really happy. :) anywho, love the story and want more. SOON. please?
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why did you stop writing the story?
I enjoyed it.
I enjoyed it.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved this story. The original plot and well thought up setting and circumstances have me hooked. You MUST continue to write it.
Athar
Athar
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The good: I love the story line - please continue with it! and soon
the bad: the verb tenses are killing me....i could help with that, if you wish.
the bad: the verb tenses are killing me....i could help with that, if you wish.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... I found this completely by accident... but I love it... I have to ask will you be updating this story any time soon? Please do, it's great!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, i hope you add on. i mean sure, the begining was a little odd (and the parasite in the arse), but there's so many great ideas in this(even the parasite in the arse - great plot twist). i sure as hell havn't read a story with a plotline like this yet. I havn't read the other reviews yet either, but from what you've been saying at the begining of chapters, i don't see why anyone would leave bad reviews. so what if there're little errors here and there - it's the internet for gods sake! and i hardly doubt that those people who left negative reviews could do any better that what you have done here. Usually when someone doesn't like a story, they stop reading and don't bother to whine and complain.
Anywho, like said: it's great, i hope you can add on, and i hope that the whole updating/reposting or whatever thing gets sorted out.
Cheers,
-jcm
Anywho, like said: it's great, i hope you can add on, and i hope that the whole updating/reposting or whatever thing gets sorted out.
Cheers,
-jcm
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent story. I wish you would finish it and let me know somehow when you update, if ever.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i just found this story .. and i love what i have read so far.. please please say you are going to finish it .. please ... later for now
angel
angel
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've found this story and just hope you're planning to finish it some day, it's really good.
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish you would come back and finish this story, it is really one of the best i have read on this site, so intriguing, and left at such a cliffhanger! i am a grammar whore, and i didn't even glance at the errors, because the plot was so interesting, the rest seemed unimportant. i would be so grateful for you to come back and give this story another chance!