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Bravo! I was terribly pleased to see that you had updated. I love the broken nose! I realize that it is more fun to have the bad guy get the girl, however, give Shaniar another chance even if it does fail, she can be love-lorn and confused! Love the story, please update as soon as possible and tell the critics to bugger off!

Shanair should not be taken out of the running! He will actually appreciate Hermione, I mean you can\'t be too cruel to her! Please please please please dont take him out of the running! As you can probably tell from my begging I really enjoy this story and I can\'t wait for you to update again! It is excellant and one of the best marriage law type stories. Absolutely brilliant! I had a hunch that Sarah would like her, and I hope that you have many ideas yet for your story!

I just absolutely love this story. I\'m glad you updated it. Hee, broke Shanairs nose. Poor him but go Hermione!! I can\'t wait for more.

Ch 9 - Well, for me, Shaman (the eldest son and mind-control baddie) has never been in the running. If Shanair (#2) is also out, and #3 son is too young, that leaves cousin Zaraus (the smiley one who seems nice) or Severus himself (but he better shape up! and he should then Obliviate the boys of any memories they shouldn\'t have about their stepmother\'s body). I am VERY glad that Hermione has finally had a chance to be with baby Sarah, who needs attention. Also glad that you\'ve moved the timeline so this is after OoTP and Hermione has proven herself in the Dept of Mysteries battle. With the year she spent in the past (in your story) plus Time-Turner use, she\'s probably 18 now. BTW, you still haven\'t addressed the issue of Severus being a Death Eater spy for the Order; I\'m curious if his sons know about it, and if Voldemort knows Severus has children.

thank you thank you thank you for this chapter.....it felt like they were not understanding Hermione or where she is coming from....to finally have someone in your fic mention that she needs time was fantastic......I loved your very in character Hermione in this chapter....would love more interaction with Hermione and the baby....and a none violent Severus would be nice too....I look forward to see what happens next

Fun chapter! Indeed...what WILL she do to the other sons? Methinks all the sons will all be eliminated from the running and Severus will be the only one who can handle her. :P Despite the couple of bobbles at the beginning, I\'m really enjoying this story. I do hope you\'ll continue with it. :)

Hmmm, I\'ve never read a fanfic quite like this one. Good job, it\'s very original. Please update soon, this story is intoxicating!

Ohmygoose. You have to finish this story. It\'s amazing.

I know that writing takes time and patience for it to be good, but please continue this. I would like to see more chapters online in the next two weeks, if possible.

Will Professor Snape be Hermonie\'s chaperone? I would like to see more interaction between Hermonie and Snape. Also, if you could, post some history on Sarah.

wow this is just plain terrifying.. i dont really find snape to be appealing or attractive here, its just frightening.