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for Contracts

by laceyweasley

person drspurdue
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good for you - you neatly answered the question how Snape could have sons that old. I also liked the way you showed th evolution of Snape\'s relationship with his wife. I hope you continue on with the SS/HG pairing. In one neat little package you have brought out Hermione\'s maternal side and her birth of her sexual awareness. Please grace us poor readers with more chapters soon.
person Jen
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to review your story. Also, just in case you were wondering, Contracts is my new fave story. hehehe. Thanks for writing it and I hope you update soon.

Thanks,
Jen
person Nat
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait for more interaction with Snapes sons and Hr should so get with Professor Snape.
person scifigurl
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to post an enocuragement to write another installment to this story.
The story concept is original and believable. I hope you will continue to write it.
person ashley
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...i love it. its different than any other snape hermione fic ive read before. update as much as possible, svp. i cant wait for the next chap.
person ScifiGurl
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. The concept is original and Professor Snape\'s character is true to Slytherin.
I could see him plotting to get the best witch to marry into his family. I am interested to see
Hermione interacting with the Snape boys and their nightly scheduled touching time.
person Michelle
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I was a little doubtful in the beginning but the premise caught my attention and now I can\'t wait for more!
person Amaryllis
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story; it is refreshingly different from most other HG/SS stories. I can hardly wait for more.

P.S.-- I hope Severus takes her for himself. ;)
person daisymae
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is great. Can\'t wait to read more. You do need to work on your spelling and punctuation.Perhaps a little more attention to details. You throw things in and the reader has no idea of how an event came about or how someone came to possess a certain knowledge of something.

Again, the story is good. Get a great beta.

daisymae
person Jess
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just don\'t allow her to end up with Severus. This is a very well written and original story and I don\'t want it to turn out like the rest. She doesn\'t have to marry Shanair (even though I\'ve taken a personal liking to him).... but she can\'t end up with Severus. PLEASE! OH!!! Let her marry one of the other Snapes... and she can see Severus on the side.. or he could be in a fit of jealous rage and.. I don\'t know... you\'re the awesome writer here..update soon!