rate_review Reviews

Normaly i don\'t review stories, but after reading your author\'s not at the end i decided to review. This is one of my all time favorite stories.
It has a wonderful plot line, it\'s well written, and it also stars my @nd favorite Harry Potter couple (Draco and Ginny is !st). Don\'t give up because i know that i and not the only one who enjoys this story.

Ch 10 - wait, so his first wife was only 12 or 13 years old when they got married and she quit school and had her first baby???? Where did she live while he was a student at Hogwarts? Don\'t tell me she had to live with her jerk father-in-law who got her pregnant!

Um, why do you sometimes refer to Hermione as Ermine? O_o\'

Otherwise... meh. Your story\'s okay. A bit squicky, but well-written with some original ideas. ^_^

In reference to a reviewer above.....me, women can and do get pregnant all the time while lactating. You have either been seriously misinformed or you\'ve never had children yourself, or both. Lactating is not the perfect contraception and it\'s one of the first things your OBGYN will warn you about after having a baby.

Question: Why is Hermione a redhead in this story? Remember canon brown hair and brown eyes? Does she look like Ginny Weasley or Lily Potter or like Hermione with red hair? I\'m always curious when I read stories where her hair color is changed because I can\'t understand the point -- why is it so important not to be brown? In stories, it\'s always, honey blond this and auburn that and honey streaked with red hightlights. LOL. Just curious.

Ch 10-11 - Severus loved his first wife, right? Eventually? Now I really don\'t understand why he invited Lupin to the binding ceremony for Hermione! So Severus didn\'t get any punishment shocks for what he did to Hermione (shocks from the protective spells he put on her)? I think Severus better make up his mind quickly - I don\'t trust his first son at all. As for who Hermione should wed, if not Zaraus the smiley cousin, then Severus, but he needs to change and be nicer to Hermione. So Severus\' sons don\'t know that he was a former Death Eater? Does he hide his Dark Mark from them? Thanks for the updates!

ooooooooooh! i\'ve been waiting for you to update for sooo long. but it was worth it. great story. i lOVE the world you created!

I dont think Snapes too possessive. I think that Snape and Herm should be togther. Maybe she should have more issues with his sons, she still has her day with them. Please update soon.

yes he is a little,
oh yeah and if snapes wife lactated from the birth of her first son she would have only had one. did u not know that lactating women dont get pregnant? They say that lactation is the perfect contraception

this is a very interesting story! like a big twist of the marriage law plot we all know. im really loving the way your story is developing. and i HOPE that snape, well, severus, to be exact, is the one who will be the final choice! pleeeease! :-) update asap! - Mo

omg, i so want to be hermione.........you are writing a great story that draws a person in and makes them want to be there, even if it is for the punishments!!!!