rate_review Reviews

I\'m glad that you are continuing this story. It\'s not that it\'s a \'bad\' fic. Just the storyline is a bit off from what most of us have read in the past. But that only makes your story more unique. And unique is something that some people find difficult to swallow. I thought the beginning of the story was a bit \'out there\' but I am really enjoying the last few chapters. I don\'t particularily like that form of \'punishment\' described in the story, but its it your story and in this case it is your right to write this in your way. I did have my reservations at the beginning but I\'m the type that cant stop something once I start. So, I will be finishing this along with you. As I said. I like where you are taking this story so far.

Red

Wow! I am sooo glad you updated. I am following this fic and I love every min. of it. I surely hope she\'ll end up as Snape\'s. :]

love this story please tell us who will be chosen. please let it be severus
wish there are more sexual encounters with sev and hermione please update and
soon.

Ch 12 - uh-oh, Zaraus got banished....he still seems like a fairly nice guy, though, and I thought Severus as \"head of family\" is supposed to find him a wife too. I\'m really dreading what Shaman will do to Hermione. Is Shaman really Severus\' half-brother? Thanks for the new chapter!

This family is really creepy. I\'m not sure that I like this story, but I find myself checking back anyway. Benefits of frequent up dates :) Your writing is definatly improving and if your going to take reviews to heart, let it be constructive advice from a great fanfic writer like RachaelW and not name calling hissy fitters. Variety in fandom is good and the listing the proper codes and warnings will help weed those out who are going to be offended by anything that is not their thing. Please don\'t abandon your story, that hurts you as well as those who took the time to read it. Good luck with the perverts ( I mean the SNAPES silly ) and I\'ll see you at the finish line, TEACHERSPET

i am enjoying your story! I hate that the cousin has been banished. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Don\'t you dare stop! I always get shitty reviews but I keep writing even if only one person wants the rest of the tale.

You\'re doin great by the way, I totally suck at gramar and punctuation so you wont get any complaints there from me. Also I really am enjoying the fic!!

alicia xox

just hurry up and have them fuck alreeady

severus is possessive yes, but thats wot makes it so good

WONDERFUL!

I love your story!