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Who cares what people think? Really.
I have been reading this storyfrom the get go and it has been confusing at times but it seems that you are working out minor problems others have had problems with.
My one comment to you is...Write if you want to and I will continue reading...For those others-Stop reading if you don\'t like it and don\'t pass any judgement on others because first off, you don\'t know them. Secondly, who are you to pass judgement on anyone.
I am not saying that no one has a right to review. What I am trying to say is don\'t let anyone get you down. I also noticed you went over a thousand hits...Congrats to you. You must be doing something right.

Just keep writing. I like this story and can\'t wait to see how things go from here. It is starting to take shape and make more sense.. Yes there were a few gaps and you\'re covering them quite well.
Keep typing..If you need inspiration do it for me..(Ha-Ha)
Sammyjo

Please don\'t give up on this. It\'s very strange, but very unique, and I hope you continue it. Not suited for everyone\'s tastes, true, but I\'m enjoying it. Thanks!

Ch 13 - uh-oh, Zaraus needs to prove his dueling skills against Severus. I\'m guessing Severus doesn\'t realize his own son Shaman is an even worse threat - and that Shaman can use mind control tricks like Severus does here. Poor Hermione... Does \"orifice\" include her mouth? Thanks for the new chapter!

definitely dont give up! your story is turning out really great. i wasnt sure if i was supposed to like zaraus or not, but i decided i dont like him lol. update asap please! keep up the great writing. :-) Mo

I am really starting to love this story! Please keep up the good work!

Don\'t give up! This is a great AU story. Maybe you should list it as so in your description, that way, readers will be better apprised. It looks to me as though Severus is a shoe-in! He\'s behaving extremely possessively. I think Shaman will give him a run for his money--son or not!

this story is so great please please update
hope hermione ends up with severus
hope to see more action between the two of them
update soon

What a great story. I love your Snape, he\'s so good at being bad and appealing. Keep up the good work new chaptar soon please

I am so loving this. Which one was Zaralus again? These names *g* I so can\'t wait for more.

Hurry up and have them fuck already