rate_review Reviews

Well, at least he\'s admitted to himself that HE wants her. Looks like the boys don\'t have a chance! Well, I can\'t say as though I thought they did. Severus has coveted her for a long time.

Your Contracts is one of the best stories on AFF. I like like it and wait for updates. Thnx

why would i hate this chapter? its wonderful! the only thing is, it is too short for my liking. but then again. you could write plenty more, and i would still be wanting to read on and on...and then there is the fact, that you update regularly. so i hope to read the next chapter sonn.
it\'s one of the few things that keep me sane while studying. bye

....I appreciate that you\'re trying to be incredibly original and for that I applaud you. However, you desperately need a beta, as there are simple grammar and spelling mistakes. You should also read back over it after you post, as AFF clients tend to mess things up, like replacing words with duplicates of another. Make sense?

Anyway, my own opinion should not matter of this story, for if I don\'t like it then I need nothing other than to not read it. Therefore, I won\'t tell you the things that I liked, the things that I didn\'t. I just wanted to share with you something that you sorely need improvement on. Thank you!

I like the way you used the comparison between Elizabeth and Hermione to help allow Snape to overcome his attitude about Hermione being one of his students.

I hope I have perceived corrcetly and that Hermione is now looking at Snape as a possible bond mate and that she has realized desires for him if only sexual at this time.

Please do not stop writing. As with any first effort, one must crawl and then walk. Some first tries I have read are awful - you have a unique storyline and beginning to provide many twists and turns. You are working out the kinks.

I realy enjoy this story. Keep up the good work.

I don\'t see why you should get any complaints, there\'s enough warning saying that the content will most likely be disagreeable. But you will get a few nutters that will read it any way and winge just because they can *laughs* And they\'re usually the ones to gutless to give thier sign in name or e-mail anyway *winks*.

One of my all time favourite fic\'s is \'TYGER! TYGER!\' here on affn and that fic and yours are similar in the context of a very needy & peverted Severus (just the way I like him) *sighs*

So don\'t you dare stop writing this little story of yours cause I LOVE IT!!

Alicia xox

I think you have done an exceptional job of taking a challenge and giving it a fresh twist. Please do not let any unsavoury reviews get you down, this is really a good fic. The different points of view that you have provided of the various characters that have been introduced are great, each time you learn a little more about their personalities as well as Severus\' and Hermione\'s. I usually nitpick on whether or not a character is canon like, but you have provided just enough of believability to project these personalities as possible. Thank you. As for one reviewer who stated that lactating mothers cannot get pregnant while, lactating...hogwash, it is not 100% positively not going to happen...if that were really true, I would never have had the little surprises in my life that call me \"Momma\", LOL. On another aside, I envy you if you did not experience post partem depression while nursing, (assumption from your AN about breastfeeding), I had it and nursed...I do not have the best of luck though, lol.

very good i will say keep updating

I am quit impressed by your story. though it is inspired by the marriage law challenge, it is still an original to me. the concept of contracting for a whole family is something i haven\'t seen in any fic yet. and it is very interresting indeed. your story deserves the 5-star rating instead of the one shown on the info-bar. i can say without being untruthful, that your story is(among the many fics i\'m reading daily) my absolute favourite. and i feel i have to thank you for writing this fic. don\'t get discouraged by bad reviews. you can\'t make everybody like your story. unfortunately there are a lot of people like me reading fics, and not always reviewing it though we like it. so be sure, that there are a lot more who enjoy your writing. Ciao