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by laceyweasley

person Static Wolf
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay when I first started reading this, it wasn\'t something I was used to and I actually walked away. But I NEEDED to know what happened so not even an hour later I was back reading it again. And I have to say that it not being like the rest of the Fics makes this Fic stand out on its own. And I LOVE it. I have no idea why other people wouldn\'t like it. It was VERY well written, there is a GREAT plot, and both Hermione and Severus actually act like themselves. So I just wanted to say keep up the AWESOME work and I CAN\'T wait for the next chappie!!! ^_^
person Jules
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is improving throughout the story. Ignore the bad reviews and only take good advice!! Definitely keep with this story!!

My thoughts - Sarah is Hermione\'s child and it all links in with the year she has \"lost\".

Am I right?
person j.
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sarah can\'t be hermiones child
because hermione was still a virgin when she was bonded

great update write again soon
person ellie
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello once again, lol. I thought I would let you know that I was plugging you over at the LiveJournal HGxSS Community where I am the co-mod. I thought you might like to see how people over there liked your fic. We\'re not as mean as the flames you recieved, and the fic went over pretty well. You have some fans besides myself. :D

http://www.livejournal.com/community/hgxss/43483.html

I\'m etoile by the way. :D
person Nikki
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG.....as a mom who breast fed i know exactly what you are talking about, and i know exactly how much a man (or wizard in this case) loves the taste of breast milk....this story is so great if you stop posting i will be very sad....and upset.....and want the story emailed directly to me......i can\'t wait for the next chapters!!!1
person ExpectedAberrance
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing as ever, even though it was kinda short this time. No matter. I\'m still looking forward to your next post, as you haven\'t pissed me off yet. I hope I\'m not the only one, because this fic deserves more. Keep it up!
person Ruby Snape
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting developments. I\'d certainly like to read more. Severus does seem rather over protective of Hermione.
person dryade
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yes! i like it! i knew he\'d chose her!
person ellie
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, just wonderful! I have a good mind to do battle with these flamers. I enjoy your story so much I would hate for you not to continue it. If you ever need a beta, don\'t hesitate to e-mail me. :D
person Gannet
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t stop writing, even if you keep getting bad reviews (they do mean people go on reading your stuff even if they profess not to like it, don\'t they?). You\'re very imaginative, the beginning was a little bit like RachelW\'s fic, but you took your distances with it pretty soon. The characters remain believeable, and Snape\'s sons, even non-canon, seem credible.
I would enjoy seeing Severus \"marry\" her in the end - he does not seem to have much against it, does he?