rate_review Reviews

oh crap...hope she\'s okay!! good chapter. :-) Mo

Interesting...no doubt Sharman will get punished for his \'misbehaviour\' I really don\'t like that boy, he is like Zarus, not to be trusted. Keep up the good work on the story.

WOW! I just finished reading ch 16 and it is really good!!! The story is awesome!!! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! Please update soon!

Pervy story...it\'s turned into one of my guilty little pleasures. Please update as soon as possible.

Excellent chapter! Thank you for deciding to post the story before correcting it. In the meantime...A CLIFFIE!?! OH THE HUMANITY!!! I do hope that Hermione ends up marrying Severus. I\'m a hopeless romantic (most of the time) when it comes to those two.

What a great story please please keep snape with hermi they just fit together, The story is getting more and more interesting and more erotic new chapters soon

this is a realy great story and very interesting. I thought though that it might have been more interesting to keep hermione more childish as in the first chapters but its great nonetheless. the last two chapters (15,16) were a bit confusing in thier timeline though. if they happen before chapter 14 you should make that clearer I think because it took me till the middle of chapter 16 to make sense out of it.

keep up the good work. can\'t wait to see the next chapters

This is such a difficult story for me to read. I hate to see Hermione reduced to a shadow, a will-less object. And yet here I am, reading the next chapter every time you post one.

I feel like an unwilling spectator at the coliseum. Repulsed and unable to look away.

Mechanically, you\'re an excellent writer, and your pace is good and your style is compelling. I\'m not flaming you about content, by the way. You\'re doing an amazing job. I wish I weren\'t so fascinated.

no no no you can\'t stop there
pleases please please continue
i love this story
please update more often
this is a great story

p.s. \"Irregardless\" may be a perfectly good word if one\'s purpose is to be redundant. It conveys a sense of insecurity in one\'s erudition. I would expect to see it in quotes, a word used by a character in the misguided attempt to sound more highly educated than he actually is, but I would never expect it in narrative prose. (Truthfully, I can\'t remember how it was used in your work; I only happened to catch it again when reading through some of your reviews. I recall that you defended your use of it at the beginning of the next chapter, and I was too engrossed in the story to go back and look at its use. Just putting in my two knuts.)