rate_review Reviews

Please update. Nice to read an original story. Keep up the great writing.

Wow, I am literally in tears after reading chapter two.
You have moved me I must continue reading.
Great job!
-LLM

Oh oh oh
I'm really bad about reading it all and THEN reviewing
At any rate I am hooked!
And saddened to see the end of chapter 16
This is me begging for an update!
-LLM

I read your synopsis of the story and think that it would be wonderful if that is the way it actually happened. I have a feeling though that Hermione will instead, succumb to her overwhelming love for the abuser (who will at some point decide that he loves her, although not as an equal) as that is just what happens in these stories. I know, I know, it is so ingrained in the pureblood mentality that it would be a miracle for him to change his way of thinking, but it is fiction so a girl can dream. It would also be nice if her parents found out at some point what they sentenced her to live forever. Wonder if she would have ever chosen to follow her magical abilities and thirst for knowledge if she had known that it meant giving up her life to belong to someone else. Very interesting and it really makes me think. p

Isn't Hermione already NOT a virgin? I thought that is what he did to her when he collected her blood. She may not have had sex, but unless I misunderstood what happened, she is no virgin. It is not by accident that the parents are not invited to the humiliation their have inflicted on their daughter by another's hand I bet. There are probably still relationships that follow this severe a path, which is scary. Overall though, it kind of reminds you of a Charles Dickens time frame and caste system (with some early AD times thrown in) that they live, huh? p

Now I am really afraid that you are not going to finish your story. Maybe if you get bored again? I hope so. Especially now that it is getting really good. I keep waiting for Shaman to mention Pansy's name so that he can get a first hand report from Hermione...or at least the gossip. That would be great as would seeing Pansy's reaction when she finds out the connection Hermione has to the Snapes. Looking forward to more. p

Oh please tell me you will continue this wonderful story. I was really getting into each of the characters.

I know it has been a long time, but PLEASE.

Love Sonia :)

Just a question, there are two sequels to this story done by a catkasimir. Are you also that penname or has someone been using your plot?

I love the story so far, but i wish you would update or at least let me know if the sequels are actually yours before I read them, Thanks ailishmckechnie@yahoo.ca

I came across this the other night and really liked where you had been going. Are you ever going to finish it or is it to be another abandoned story?

OMG!!!I was searching for this story forever i couldn't find it through search, i was hoping for an update is there any hope you are posting this story on any other sites, i simply am very attached to this story i love it and want to know what happens next.