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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really,really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really,
really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, like your theme.
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really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, like your theme.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (I love it) ^_____^
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so powerfully written! The depth to which you go to describe the emotions going through each character really make this story poignant!
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this. Its beautiful. Well written.
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Draco\'s maturity is very impressive.
I love this story. Please update soon.
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is deep and riviting. I was hooked from just reading the first chapter. Keep up the wonderful work.
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved Draco in this chapter--everything he wanted to give to Harry--be with him for the rest of his life. He wants to marry him. I loved this paragraph: I want to raise a family with him; the war is sure to leave a lot of children without parents and I know Harry would be a wonderful father. He could teach me how to be one as well. I want to watch him read bedtime stories to our kids and teach them how to fly. I want to argue with him over which House the kids will be sorted into when they start Hogwarts. I want to cry with him when they leave for school and the house is empty for the first time in years. I want to stand beside him as we greet our grandchildren for the first time.
It was wonderful, touching and I admired Draco\'s generosity in giving Harry all he needs without putting himself first. Not an easy thing to do and I hope his patience and his generosity are rewarded so both he and Harry are happy. I look forward to reading more.
It was wonderful, touching and I admired Draco\'s generosity in giving Harry all he needs without putting himself first. Not an easy thing to do and I hope his patience and his generosity are rewarded so both he and Harry are happy. I look forward to reading more.
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh - that is absolutely brilliant! Is there more coming? Hope so! Fabulous! Keep it up!
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I must admit I really like your story. I usually don\'t do R or NC-17, but I read it.
I love how u portray Draco, he\'s not at all how I imagined him, and that is what I like.
Your writing style is good, but you should discribe the surroundings more. My english teacher always tells me that detail makes the difference.
Thank you for your time to read this,
Ice Witch
I must admit I really like your story. I usually don\'t do R or NC-17, but I read it.
I love how u portray Draco, he\'s not at all how I imagined him, and that is what I like.
Your writing style is good, but you should discribe the surroundings more. My english teacher always tells me that detail makes the difference.
Thank you for your time to read this,
Ice Witch
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that is the most sad/beautiful/hopefuly fanfiction i had read in a long time
little spelling things and missing letters occured, id look that over if i were you, but i love it!!!
little spelling things and missing letters occured, id look that over if i were you, but i love it!!!