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Hey there!

I can't believe you added an extra chapter just me! me! Thank you! I loved it, I thought it was very romantic.

Now... oh dread, when she has to tell her brother that she's seriously dating Lucius she's gonna be in trouble. And I wonder what Lucius would do if he found out that she had been spying on him.

I think you're doing a really great job on the story, and I'll be looking very much forward to your next chapter.

Love Leonora.

Great!!! Long chapters!!! I love when I have enough pages to read during my coffee break :-) et for those chapters I read yesterdI agI agree the fact that the relationship have to be more developped. Nothing like a soap opera where you see one action during several episodes, but it could be good to relate more conversations between the two love birds or to detail more dates.

Now it's time for coffee break and enjoy these two new chapters :-)

i've copied the last three chapters to be read during my coffee break, and i'll get back to give a good review. But I noticed the chapters are too short :-(

Hi again!

How nice of you to put two chaptout out already! I find your story really fascinating, though I wouldn't have minded some more chapters about the dates they went on. I would have like to see more about how things developed between them... and... I would have liked to see Lucius comforting her about her bruised wrist, I would have expected him to be more persistant in making her tell what really happened.

Well... I still love your story, and I will be looking forward to see what happens when she finishes the job.

Keep up the good work.

Love Leonora.

Hey again!

Still liking your story. I'm looking forward to see how things develop between Lucius and Adrienne.

Keep up the writing, it's good!

Leonora.

good!! There's not enough stories abouciuucius!! Keep us updated often please!!

Hi there!

This is interesting! I think your story has some great potential, and I would love to see where you go with this.

Keep up the good work.

Leonora.