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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Sorry for not reviewing before now.
I really enjoyed this chapter! The sex-part was good :o)
Looking forward to the next part of the journey.
Love Leonora.
Sorry for not reviewing before now.
I really enjoyed this chapter! The sex-part was good :o)
Looking forward to the next part of the journey.
Love Leonora.
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
I\'m so happy that she didn\'t just give in right away ;o) Another great chapter! Looking forward to their trip.
Love Leonora.
I\'m so happy that she didn\'t just give in right away ;o) Another great chapter! Looking forward to their trip.
Love Leonora.
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Lucius is changing his mind!
I\'m not sure that I would forgive him right away, if I was Adrienne, though... but hey... I wouldn\'t be sitting by the window waiting for his letters either. I would be too angry with him to do that.
Let\'s see what he\'ll do, and how Adrienne reacts. It would be nice to see some begging ;o) But whatever you write, I\'ll be waiting for your next chapter.
Love Leonora.
I\'m not sure that I would forgive him right away, if I was Adrienne, though... but hey... I wouldn\'t be sitting by the window waiting for his letters either. I would be too angry with him to do that.
Let\'s see what he\'ll do, and how Adrienne reacts. It would be nice to see some begging ;o) But whatever you write, I\'ll be waiting for your next chapter.
Love Leonora.
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! I feel so sorry for Adrienne! He\'d better come to his senses soon!
A good chapter!
And happy birthday!
Love Leonora.
A good chapter!
And happy birthday!
Love Leonora.
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I just knew that he was going to turn her away!!
He\'d better change his mind though! Or he\'ll regret it I\'m sure.
And she\'s very brave that she had the nerve to tell him. He should respect her for that; she could have just chosen to keep it a secret and hope that he wouldn\'t find out about it.
So you actually let your brother write you last chapter?? Wow! I would never even show my stories to my brother!!
I\'m sorry if you had to keep your brother from reading my review because it would hurt his feelings. I thought the whole thing with Lucius in the closet was a good idea though. I just thought it would have been better if Adrienne didn\'t know that he was in the closet.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Love Leonora.
He\'d better change his mind though! Or he\'ll regret it I\'m sure.
And she\'s very brave that she had the nerve to tell him. He should respect her for that; she could have just chosen to keep it a secret and hope that he wouldn\'t find out about it.
So you actually let your brother write you last chapter?? Wow! I would never even show my stories to my brother!!
I\'m sorry if you had to keep your brother from reading my review because it would hurt his feelings. I thought the whole thing with Lucius in the closet was a good idea though. I just thought it would have been better if Adrienne didn\'t know that he was in the closet.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Love Leonora.
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Finally a new chapter! Ahh! I thought that Chris was going to say something about her spying on Lucius, while he was hiding in the closet!
I liked the way she described her feelings, though, I must tell you, I too thought it was a little bit too much information for her brother. Especially since he demanded it from her like that. It would have worked better if she told a girlfriend about it - free-willingly - and if she didn\'t know that Lucius was listening; I don\'t think it\'s realistic that she would forget that he was in the closet.
Well - it\'s just meant as constructive critisism. I don\'t mean to bring your story down, I really like it.
And I\'m very curious about how Lucius is going to react to her spying on him. He will be hurt and very angry probably! Can\'t wait for it. :o)
Love Leonora.
Finally a new chapter! Ahh! I thought that Chris was going to say something about her spying on Lucius, while he was hiding in the closet!
I liked the way she described her feelings, though, I must tell you, I too thought it was a little bit too much information for her brother. Especially since he demanded it from her like that. It would have worked better if she told a girlfriend about it - free-willingly - and if she didn\'t know that Lucius was listening; I don\'t think it\'s realistic that she would forget that he was in the closet.
Well - it\'s just meant as constructive critisism. I don\'t mean to bring your story down, I really like it.
And I\'m very curious about how Lucius is going to react to her spying on him. He will be hurt and very angry probably! Can\'t wait for it. :o)
Love Leonora.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
I hope you have nicip tip to France! I will keep an eye out for you next chapter.
Love Leonora.
I hope you have nicip tip to France! I will keep an eye out for you next chapter.
Love Leonora.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 9 to be printed for you all know now :-)
It's much much much better!!! I LIKE THIS STORY!!! But the brother and harry can both go to hell :-(
ooh!! Note for the author : you're half french? Et bien si j'avais su, j'aurai mis mes commentaires depuis le d
It's much much much better!!! I LIKE THIS STORY!!! But the brother and harry can both go to hell :-(
ooh!! Note for the author : you're half french? Et bien si j'avais su, j'aurai mis mes commentaires depuis le d
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was some chapter there!
Very delicious indeed :o)
I wonder what is going to happen when her brother finds out that she's still seeing Lucius, even if she has finished the job. I see some trouble ahead!
I'm very happy to hear that you're going to add some more chapters to flesh it out, I think it is a good idea. I will be looking forward to your next chapter!
Love Leonora.
Very delicious indeed :o)
I wonder what is going to happen when her brother finds out that she's still seeing Lucius, even if she has finished the job. I see some trouble ahead!
I'm very happy to hear that you're going to add some more chapters to flesh it out, I think it is a good idea. I will be looking forward to your next chapter!
Love Leonora.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That damn brother of hers and Harry need to mind their own damn business, if she has to break up with Lucius then her brother should break up with Nina its only fair. I wouldn't let no man tell me what to do.