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for Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

by oldwolf

person XXX
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have a look at this:

http://www.bdsm-gear.com/misc16.html

Looks like an idea for pansy????
person sasqch
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you cleared up the issue of Hermione\'s use of the term \"Master\". But more importantly to the characterization, I am glad that it was Harry who ended up having concerns about the use of the term. As I have stated before in my previous reviews, based on his earlier self doubts, he desperately needs to have a stable and equal person as a girl friend. I found Harry
person cj_cold
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter.

Liked the explaination that Hermione was only playing the part to spice things up.

Liked the rubber balls as spell grenades, hope to see it used in the war. Maybe a flash spell, a spell to make a loud bang, and something to produce smoke to go with the stunners. could be useful for assaulting a room full of defenders, toss the spell balls in the open door or window and while the DEs are trying to figure out which one of them is the traitor doing this, attack. Anything being done with Harry\'s other idea about the cloaks with Notice Me Not charms like the Knightbus.

Like the foreshadowing of the young women with the Dark Mark, I hope its a Hufflepuff Girl(the only house not represented in Harry\'s Harem) but can\'t wait to see who it is regardless.

Like the reintroduction of Marissa and Elaine, hope they join in soon. Might want to put in a discription of their appearance as its been so many chapters since they were introduced that I only vaguely remeber what they look like.

Nice explanation of Tonks.

Can\'t wait for Narcissa\'s punishment.

What is the date, I have completely lost my sense of time in this story and have no clue what time of year it is.

Read you next update.
person Sean
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read more, please try to update this story as soon as you are able to
person Prince Charon
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another very interesting, VERY hot part.

You\'re very good at this, thank you for the fast update.

More soon, please.
person Maniac Musician
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...This is perfect. I hope there\'s a LOT more to the story. Out of all of your stories, this is definitely my favorite....keep updating, i\'m in love.
person sasqch
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was wrong
person wes
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha ha need more cant wait for the next
person Prince Charon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for the quick update.

Very, very interesting and hot!

More soon, please.
person Zero
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Excellent!

Would have liked to read that Bella-Cho-Cissa scene, you mentioned, though.

Write more.