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Great story! I especially like the Harry/Narcissa pairing but it is unfortunately very rare. I really hope you're going to upload new chapters soon!

You have an interesting concept with the ensalvement of the black sisters. I would like to see some sort of explination of the chokers both women wear. I'm pretty sure it is a 'proud' (i asume this becase the always make sure they're visible) display of their enslavement...is it a formal sign, is it recognized by the general wizard populace? I also find it odd that after the black sisters 'raped' Harry, he has only received oral sex, why is this?

Anyway, good story. Keep it up.

Henry

Good start. It's an interesting pairing; I look forward to further chapters.

Very, very interesting.

More soon, please.

A most intriuging first cha[pter indeed, I look forward to more, I wonder how this will turn out, heh imagine using the curse againso Cho Chang as payback for what she did to him, should you go the vengance route

Hoping for more
BrianDarksoul~

Nice idea and I wouldn't mind seeing more of the story.. If you can learn how to spell 'Bellatrix'. And you had Harry take Bellatrix's wand, but she had it back at the end of the chapter with no explanation given. Your info on the spell was a little shoddy too. Is the spell breakable at all? Or is the power required, given that Dumbledore only thought he and Tom could cast it, more than enough to make it completely permanent. And what does it do to Narcissa's marriage? She can't possibly be married anymore, that'd be just silly. How the Malfoy's handle this would be interesting too, although I'm pretty sure Lucius wouldn't care.

I do hope you continue it, just to answer the questions above (and hopefufix fix the spelling errors). I'd love to see what happens when he has to go back to school as I'm sure they would have to go with him. I doubt the curse would allow them to be seperated that long. It would also be interesting to see how the school body, especially his friends, handle this new development. I can't see the trio remaining a trio. Neville would be wanting to kill Bella.. Harry may have to be resorted, although I'm sure he'll have a cosy tower for him and his two slaves, rather than a normal room, anyway.

Must say this is a new one on me love it though keep up the good work you old wolf and keep the chapters coming can't wait for more.