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Hey just wanted to give you an idea for you story. In book 5 Dumbledore tells Harry that the order has more reliable means of communication. Now that Hermione and Harry are in the order, in your story. I thought you could have them learn that form of communicating as part of there initiation training it just requires a wand they just wave there wand and it sends a jet of silver light with the message to whom ever the recipient is. not sure exactly what form the message takes like sound or righting but Dumbledore uses it in goblet of fire when he called Hagrid to Harry Krum and himself at the forbidden forest if you want to confirm what I

I JUST FOUND THIS STORY AND IT WAS AWESOME. UPDATE SOON

great story. im only just starting to like the B/H/N pairing stories but this one is a great example. Update soon.

Hey, I\'ve mentioned before that I like this fic on one of the Yahoo Newsgroups we belong to.
One thing, though. It is a little S/M for my tastes. Not that this is necessarily bad. Harry\'s got a lot of anger. But I was just hoping that, somewhere along the lline, the three of them could just go to bed and get it on without the whips and the butt plugs.
But, whatever. It\'s still a fun fic.
Aerie22

I enjoyed how you have Harry try and stay a step ahead of the Sisters. I can\'t wait to find out if Petunia will et involved with Harry also.

fantastic story -- really enjoyed chapter 6. the story has gone from a PWP to one with an true story line with characters remaining in character. adding hermione into the mix via her pledge opens a lot of doors. and having tonks become harry\'s permanent bodyguard also has potential. here\'s looking forward to the next chapters.

A very good, very hot, very interesting part.

More soon, please.

You should get some sort of prize for being the first person to use a butt plug in a Harry Potter fic. I also can\'t help but wonder what was going through Hermione\'s mind while Harry was spanking Bellatrix, maybe she wanted to be the one bent over his lap with her skirt hiked up.

seriously, i just read chapter six, and i love how u make snape look like a idiot, and ron look like a pansy. i love harry being the top wolf. plz, if you could do me a huge favor, include hermione and tonks into the mix, so its not just harry and the black sister all the time, though i don\'t think i could stop reading this story if you choose not to use my suggestion. seriously, im addicted.