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A-FUCKING-MAZINE

SPLENDIND

EXCELLETNLY WRITTEN

VERY DESCRIPTIVE.....

I THOUROUGHLY ENJOYED READING WHAT YOU HAVE SO FAR, CAN\'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!

I liked how you had Harry make Tonks first time with them special.

another fine chapter. the characterization in this chapter truly shines. you have the grangers being introduced to the concept of their daughter\'s new condition, as well as hermione\'s reaction to tonks\'s request. both are true to the characters you\'ve made. one scene that was really well done was harry\'s emotional break-down in the granger\'s house when thinking about his lost family. it was subtle and not too ham-handed, yet it was poinent enough to get the point across. i also liked the playfulness of hermione\'s parents -- quite a departure from the rest of the adults in the story.

and now tonks is a thrall -- interesting. i wonder how this new-found knowledge from his three thralls will help harry once he begins to consciously access it. one question though, since hermione is bound to harry, and not as a thrall, what does that mean? i mean i realize she must remain in close proximity with harry, but can she gain some of the knowledge that harry now has?

anyway, i am eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this fun story

chris

great chapter but shouldent his house elfs be doing the cooking and all that i mean he has to who are fanatical to him any way post again soon it drives me nuts waiting

Very glad to see this updated so quickly.

Very good, hot, interesting part. I see Ginny and Luna won\'t be joining the group.
Ah, well, four should be more than enough, anyway. (Um, you *are* going to stop
at four girls in the harem, right?)

Looking forward to more. Soon, please.

iv read fics for 6 hours a day for a year and a half and yours is one of the best iv ever read pleas keep writeing
i think id go insane if you didnt finsh this story
humbly
chaos

I liked how you added Tonks & Hermione to Harry\'s Harem.

Hi, love your story.

I like that Tonks is joining in, but I think it is a bit too brief at Tonks explanation why she has to had the spell cast on her. Same at Harry showing concern for Hermione in the hospital wing.

Can I request an over the knee spanking scene for Hermione? Not the heavy punishment type, but nice and playfull.

Keep up the good work.

Thanks.

Great story(I would put it in my favorites, but my account isn\'t working) I hope you contenue to make great fics.

Great story, good chapter. Went and doubled the difficulty of getting out this level of work now with 5 main personalities instead of the 3 you had. you definately have my repect.. a 4 person harem, i think thats the bigesst i have seen to this date. Can\'t wait till the March Chapter :)