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for Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

by oldwolf

person sasqch
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was afraid that with the accelerated posting schedule that the story would suffer. Fortunately that was not the case. The last few chapters continued the story in a competent manner until we got here.

I liked how this chapter tied up a lot of loose ends, but still left a few things out there. The use of the magic hand grenades had been hinted at quite broadly, but I was happy that the spells on Hermione
person Spike of Doom
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great ending to a great story i think. ive always been 100% in favor of harems and this story was everything i could ask for and more because it actually had a interesting plot. I hope you start more works. hopefully another harem?one thats mostly smut lol
person James
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I must say tis is offically my fav fic.

James

Howl!
person Prince Charon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, hot, interesting, hot (it bears repeating) part.

More soon, please.
person Axelalx
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story seems to be getting a little rushed, eh, wolf?
person yeknottemaster
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
truly xlnt - I\'m impressed with the varied twists that this story has taken along the way. Hot stuff, too! ;D

person Sean
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read more, please try to post the next chapter as soon as you\'re able to
person James Benfield
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, keep up the good work.

James
person ken
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t wait for the next chapters. but why did you par the way you did.
person blaznotaku
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story, but I got a question about chapter 40, when harry says