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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, hermione finally admits to herself that she is seriously attracted to harry -- with a bit of help from tonks. hermione\'s concept on her virginity will definitely make for an interesting time, whenever she finally gets around to expressing her love for harry. i wonder, will she be able to do so, especially if his thralls are in the same room, or will tonks have to arrange an accidental seduction?
the comment regarding the contentment of the grangers is quite humorous; i would have figured hermione to be a bit flustered by the thought of her parents having sex since she does seem to be a bit puritan in her approach.
and if harry didn\'t have enough on his plate, now his aunt is getting involved? ye gods. the poor boy better stock up on his fluid intake
personally, i found this to be another great chapter just because of the continued growing character development. a true rarity in an adult-themed story
chris
the comment regarding the contentment of the grangers is quite humorous; i would have figured hermione to be a bit flustered by the thought of her parents having sex since she does seem to be a bit puritan in her approach.
and if harry didn\'t have enough on his plate, now his aunt is getting involved? ye gods. the poor boy better stock up on his fluid intake
personally, i found this to be another great chapter just because of the continued growing character development. a true rarity in an adult-themed story
chris
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very glad to see this updated.
Harry is cool, and I like the way he dealt with Vernon.
Hermione\'s a bit horny, I see. Hopefully, Harry will help her with that.
More soon, please.
Harry is cool, and I like the way he dealt with Vernon.
Hermione\'s a bit horny, I see. Hopefully, Harry will help her with that.
More soon, please.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, ive also been the anoynimous person, but decided from now on to go by this name. i agree, harry and hermione should get together, but harry should not use the servus secus spell on her, it would take away from her character too much. keep up the good work, and by now im seeing a pttern of about 1 chapter a week, if possible, lets get that up to 1 chapter a day, onjly if possible, lol. GOOD JOB!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed how you had Harry protct Petunia & Dudley. And how you had Harry talk Remus into help protecting Hermione\'s Parents also.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is interesting, but, there seems to be a missing chapter between 1 and 2. Also, some of the spelling/formatting errors make the story harder to read than it should be.
I hope you can add material to the first chapter, to show Harry casting the spell, or at least create a more coherent bridge between the two chapters.
thanks for listening, and, I am intrigued by your story and want to read more of it.
red
I hope you can add material to the first chapter, to show Harry casting the spell, or at least create a more coherent bridge between the two chapters.
thanks for listening, and, I am intrigued by your story and want to read more of it.
red
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay -- i really liked this chapter. there might not have been a lot of action or such, but there was a great deal of character development ocurring.
it was good to see that even though harry has used a semi-dark sex slave spell, his inherent goodness is still overriding everything else. he comes to the rescue of his one remaining blood relative (and her son) when the chips are down. he does not take joy in attacking vernon -- unlike cissy and bella which in itself was a beautiful touch. he remains calm and collected rather than lashing out in an acceptable level of retribution. this strength of character is reinforced by his concern for both remus and the grangers. any misgivings that may have been lingering in the minds of harry\'s friends and colleagues would be complete erased.
i also liked the slow escalation in hermione\'s attraction/reaction to harry. it started earlier in the story when she wanted to see harry reprimand his thralls, just to see for herself how much he had changed. then of course, after her oath was made and she forced herself to be bound to harry\'s side, she has been bombarded with the sexual activities of her friend and his thralls to the point that she (unconsciously) masturbated while watching them. in this chapter, she basically breaks down and begins to lust after harry. i like that rather than immediately jump straight into a sex scene, the attention is diverted. this is definitely in character; she would want to be in a bit more control still. i also like the fact that harry may not have figured out what is happening with hermione, but tonks certainly did. i wonder if tonks will be arraigning a possible situation for her master and his best friend?
anyway, i really have been enjoying this story immensely and am eagerly awaiting any and all updates
chris
it was good to see that even though harry has used a semi-dark sex slave spell, his inherent goodness is still overriding everything else. he comes to the rescue of his one remaining blood relative (and her son) when the chips are down. he does not take joy in attacking vernon -- unlike cissy and bella which in itself was a beautiful touch. he remains calm and collected rather than lashing out in an acceptable level of retribution. this strength of character is reinforced by his concern for both remus and the grangers. any misgivings that may have been lingering in the minds of harry\'s friends and colleagues would be complete erased.
i also liked the slow escalation in hermione\'s attraction/reaction to harry. it started earlier in the story when she wanted to see harry reprimand his thralls, just to see for herself how much he had changed. then of course, after her oath was made and she forced herself to be bound to harry\'s side, she has been bombarded with the sexual activities of her friend and his thralls to the point that she (unconsciously) masturbated while watching them. in this chapter, she basically breaks down and begins to lust after harry. i like that rather than immediately jump straight into a sex scene, the attention is diverted. this is definitely in character; she would want to be in a bit more control still. i also like the fact that harry may not have figured out what is happening with hermione, but tonks certainly did. i wonder if tonks will be arraigning a possible situation for her master and his best friend?
anyway, i really have been enjoying this story immensely and am eagerly awaiting any and all updates
chris
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more harry going to fuck hermione if he dose dont put the spell on her let her be as is
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY updated!!!! I\'ve been waiting, while there wasn\'t any sex it was still another great chapter, I Can\'t wait to read more.
I\'ll be waiting!!!
I\'ll be waiting!!!
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Something is really wrong.. The 1st chapter ends with Harry lickin Bella off... Then the second chapter\'s formatting is horrible and doesn\'t really explain how the pair got there in the first place. And then there is a but of incest. Ew? Oh well. Its still good enough to keep going..
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nothing really to say but I did find it annoying with Hermione there. Rather half assed with the way you stuck her there. Sall\' good. Aw man.. UPdate!