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I liked how you have Harry trying to help Neville get over what happened to his parents. By letting him & Ginny punish Bellatrix themselves.

an interesting idea to have the sisters tell their story. i would have thought that harry would have liked to have kept his involvement with the thralls a bit more \"low-key\". i mean, i cannot see skeeter not play up the angle that the sisters are now the property of the boy-who-lived. although draco\'s reaction was quite humorous.

i like the pace of hermione\'s and harry\'s developing relationship. it is quite believable and within the characteristics you have created for the two. i like how tonks has taken it upon herself to make sure that the pair does not get bogged down and stagnate into a holding pattern. i also like the subtle touch of tonks\'s visit to the children\'s playground. it would appear that her earlier comment about harry giving the black family future heirs is still in her mind.

as to the upcoming school year, i think that you plan on a lot of grief for harry and company. i mean the whole school will have read about the history of the sisters by now. so will he be ridiculed for having to enslave women to get their attention? add to the mix that one of them is draco\'s mom, and it gets even uglier. and of course dumbledore just made it a bit more complex by hiring belle as the new potions instructor. now that won\'t be a conflict of interest, will it?

i do have to wonder about the housing situation: i know that dumbledore explained that the sisters will be allowed to live with harry, but he did not know about tonks being added to the group. nor the new complication of hermione and her need to be with harry. also, ron\'s jealousy might reoccur, seeing as harry will be allowed to live with his sex partners, whereas ron won\'t. and of course, the last ron heard, harry had not as of yet recruited tonks and hermione into his harem.

ought to be an interesting few chapters coming up next.

chris

Greate Chapters!!!

I love all the Hermione actions.

Please keep it up!

I really love your story. I do however feel that it is sad that more people don\'t review. I have read the story since the beggining, and I noticed today that you have less than a hundred reviews, which is sad considering the amount of hits you have for the story. I really love the way that the story is being developed in. Keep up the good work :)

Excellent! Like how this is progressing. For a moment, I wished Harry had tried bed Rita! lol

Write more.

I enjoyed reading how you had Draco realize who was having sex with his Mother in the Alley. And how you had Hermione be Sodomized by Tonks.

I\'ve really enjoyed your story though there is one thing that is puzzling me. Hermione. Her interactions just don\'t seem quite right and i can\'t quite put my finger on what is wrong.

I know you\'re not aiming to be cannon or anything - but there is just something with her character that seems odd to what you are making her out to be. In that, it just doesn\'t seem to gel together. i know this feedback is a bit odd, but it just is sticking in my mind, if you know what i mean.

Other than that - i am really liking it.

More please.

YAY! you updated! And thank you for the email about it, I wouldn\'t have thought to check until tomorrow!!


THANKS!!!!!!!

Now, more please!

YES! Thank you for updating today! Excellent chapter again, I look forward to reading more, and soon I hope....and Dark appreciated it too, but I can see she\'s already reviewed....THANK AGAIN!


WIND

Very, very hot, good, and interesting.

Hermione\'s decision, while curious, does fit.

More soon, please.