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hey it\'s your buddy haitham
great work here man, though abit lacking actionwise

love it! can\'t wait to see the audition.

I liked how you have Harry considering adding Cho to his harem. Please update soon.

Ok, there has to be a chapter missing after Chapter 1. At the end of 1, Narcissa and Bellatrix are having their way with Harry and then in 2 four people show up at Privit Drive? Huh? Their already bound, who knows how. Is Voldemort dead? No one mentions him. Harry is acting like a leader. Why? This story is too confusing.

This is an awesome fic. I so look forward to it.

Very, very interesting, and not quite what I was expecting.

Thank you for updating so quickly.

More soon, please.

hey great chapters keep up the good work just one thing can harrys girls get pregnant or dose the sex slave spell stop that from happening

well, i\'m going to break tradition and say that this chapter felt a bit odd.

i mean, i liked the character development displayed with the dialogue between cissa and bella. their conversation regarding their feelings about both the humiliations and what harry might be going through was very well done. and it did wonders as to making me care more about these two.

but that was about it. i mean, first, snape was overly nice to harry. i thought he was supposed to be still undercover as a death-eater? i mean, yes, he has declared a truce with harry, and harry did take him to task regarding the treatment of neville, but snape was abnormally gracious to harry. in a classroom full of death-eater spawn.

next, we have harry\'s two new teachers. and they both just happen to be young nubile hot women, both of whom disregard the dress convention as well as the teacher/student dialogue standards? hell, the runes teacher basically made a come-on to harry with the \"accidental\" misspelling.

and what is up with cho? she wants to apologise to harry? but narcissa knows that harry is extremely pissed at her. and hermione (who as was explicitly pointed out in this chapter is basically the thralls mistress) despises her. so why would narcissa even begin to listen to cho\'s request? but then to turn it around into a punishment scenario -- that *could* make sense, but only if harry initiated it and was there to participate in it. since he was not there, in fact was tied up and distracted from it, he gained nothing from it. so it obviously was for nothing but narcissa\'s enjoyment. the only way this makes sense is if narcissa plans on making cho her personal little pet.

however, my biggest peeve with this chapter came in the last sequence. through the aforementioned flashback, tonks reveals to hermione why she is being referred to as \"mistress\". i have no problem with that concept. it fits with the manner in which harry has been treating hermione throughout the story. the fault is the last sentence

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! Very glad to see this updated so soon.

I liked the convo between Hermione and Tonks in the flashback, thouHermions\'s last line (post-
flashback)has interesting implications.

I\'m not sure I like the idea of Cho joining the Harem, though. I\'d prefer Ginny, or Luna, or
Lavender, or the Patil twins, but I\'ll keep reading it even if you do add Cho, because its so well
written.

More soon, please.

*falls over laughing*

SNAPE TORMENT!!!!
Gotta love it, anyway, I am so so so so so Glad you updated tonight!!!!!!
I love your story, and now since you did point out that a lot of my reviews had a lot of ..........here is one long fucking review with hardly any punctuation....but a lot of repitition...

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