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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs evilly* Wind was right.....This is just.....pure evillness.....LOVE IT!!!!
Glad he got you to post when he did, although I probably woulda gotten to read it now anyways, Love this story, I hope Cho severely regrets every wrong she has ever done to poor...(slighly Dark Harry) I love how complex you\'ve made the structure of the harem and that you\'re taking the time to develop it even further, and Inuyisha was right, I\'d be MORE than happy to help with kinky outfits and shit like that....*grins evilly* there\'s a reason Wind likes me so much...Anyway back to the story, it\'s very original....and I love the idea of the French Maid\'s outfit.
If ya ever need some ideas...don\'t be afraid to ask....you officially have my email address...so...use it if you want. *winks...just to piss Wind off*
*hugs!*
Elizabeth
Glad he got you to post when he did, although I probably woulda gotten to read it now anyways, Love this story, I hope Cho severely regrets every wrong she has ever done to poor...(slighly Dark Harry) I love how complex you\'ve made the structure of the harem and that you\'re taking the time to develop it even further, and Inuyisha was right, I\'d be MORE than happy to help with kinky outfits and shit like that....*grins evilly* there\'s a reason Wind likes me so much...Anyway back to the story, it\'s very original....and I love the idea of the French Maid\'s outfit.
If ya ever need some ideas...don\'t be afraid to ask....you officially have my email address...so...use it if you want. *winks...just to piss Wind off*
*hugs!*
Elizabeth
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another interesting installment with a great deal of character development
Cho is very introspective. This helps us truly understand where she is coming from as well as lets the reader know that she acknowledges that the way Harry is treating her is not his normal character. She needs to use her logic to determine the dichotomy of the situation. Her debasement at Harry
Cho is very introspective. This helps us truly understand where she is coming from as well as lets the reader know that she acknowledges that the way Harry is treating her is not his normal character. She needs to use her logic to determine the dichotomy of the situation. Her debasement at Harry
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter write more soon
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That should definetly give Cho something to think about...I hope she gets the worst punishments of all when she does shit she isn\'t supposed to ....I HATE THAT FUCKING BITCH....almost as much as I love reading Harry Potter Fanfics altogether...
Anyway,....I got off topic again...anyway great chapter, very glad Wind talked you into posting it early, *hugs the author* Love this fic......and if you ever need anymore ideas for kinky outfits....I\'m sure Elizabeth and I could help.....
*grins evilly* TORTURE TO CHO!!!!
Can\'t wait til the next chapter,
*Hugs*
Inuyisha
Anyway,....I got off topic again...anyway great chapter, very glad Wind talked you into posting it early, *hugs the author* Love this fic......and if you ever need anymore ideas for kinky outfits....I\'m sure Elizabeth and I could help.....
*grins evilly* TORTURE TO CHO!!!!
Can\'t wait til the next chapter,
*Hugs*
Inuyisha
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Buddy of mine told me about this story...told me you were going by reviews....so....I figured it was time I got off my lazy ass and reviewed, so here it is, the bitch Cho had it coming. I\'m glad someone out there finally put that bitch in her place. I\'ve read it all before, bu-ut I seldom read author notes....sorry about that, I have no idea if you mentioned the whole review thing or not, Wind can keep me posted on updates, since I really have no email account of my own, but that\'s o.k. I can trust him, now keep typing, I want to read more. Oh, um, Please?
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I see fics like this all the damn time that are full of or entirely slash, or are devoted to Draco, Severus, blah blah blah.
It\'s very cool to finally see one with Harry and Hermione in the positions of power. I hope the end is nowhere in sight!
It\'s very cool to finally see one with Harry and Hermione in the positions of power. I hope the end is nowhere in sight!
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!
Great chapter, I am so glad that I got you to post this tonight. I may not be on for the next couple of days, depending on what my plans take place.
Anyway, loved the new chapter, Cho finally has to think on what the hell\'s gonna happen, hope it gives the fucking bitch nightmares, and it really ought to irk her that Hermione is her superior!
LMFAO
O.k. now I can sleep a little more peacefully, thank you...
And good night,
Wind
Great chapter, I am so glad that I got you to post this tonight. I may not be on for the next couple of days, depending on what my plans take place.
Anyway, loved the new chapter, Cho finally has to think on what the hell\'s gonna happen, hope it gives the fucking bitch nightmares, and it really ought to irk her that Hermione is her superior!
LMFAO
O.k. now I can sleep a little more peacefully, thank you...
And good night,
Wind
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Really Enjoying the story am I. Cho\'s Audition was definitely quite fun, although not for her MUAHAHAHA.
Since you mentioned the First Wife spell, I imagine that it\'s going to happen sometime. Can\'t wait to see that, considering it\'s extremely obvious that that J.K. Rowling person is going to have Harry and Hermione get together in her stories.
Keep up the good work. Now post another chapter!
Since you mentioned the First Wife spell, I imagine that it\'s going to happen sometime. Can\'t wait to see that, considering it\'s extremely obvious that that J.K. Rowling person is going to have Harry and Hermione get together in her stories.
Keep up the good work. Now post another chapter!
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I will be the first to admit I do not like Cho. I dislike her in canon and I dislike her in fanfics. When you first brought up the concept of introducing her into the harem, I was appalled.
However, with this chapter, you have actually made her into an interesting, fully-developed character. Rather than being a simple echo of one of the already existing members of the story, she is now hesitant about her earlier, perhaps rash, decision. This is a nice twist. In the previous chapter, Cho is a very arrogant, self-important character. This is shown by her arguments for inclusion into Harry
However, with this chapter, you have actually made her into an interesting, fully-developed character. Rather than being a simple echo of one of the already existing members of the story, she is now hesitant about her earlier, perhaps rash, decision. This is a nice twist. In the previous chapter, Cho is a very arrogant, self-important character. This is shown by her arguments for inclusion into Harry
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!
Also very interesting. Thank you for updating so quickly.
More soon, please.
Also very interesting. Thank you for updating so quickly.
More soon, please.