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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t even finish it, for the mere fact that you renamed Bellatrix \"Beatrix\"
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, and VERY hot.
Interesting that Pansy is that dumb, but not surprising.
Bellatrix and Narcissa might have similar attitudes, but
they are bright and mature enough not to share them.
Very funny prank on dumbles.
More soon, please.
Interesting that Pansy is that dumb, but not surprising.
Bellatrix and Narcissa might have similar attitudes, but
they are bright and mature enough not to share them.
Very funny prank on dumbles.
More soon, please.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hoped that you might make a bit of breathcontrol at some point. It is extreme yes, but you already have a lot of SM/control in there. I like your story btw, update soon plz
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO that was great i am glad you put more with harry and his girls pansys punishment i am not sure was enough but whatever o i have a quistion can harry use unforgivables on them becouse a good crucio would have done pansy a world of good anyway is harry going to marry hermione anytime soon when tonks changed into hermione was that her own being torn or was it just becouse she was mimicing hermiones body?
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorit stories looking foward to the next chapters ?
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You REALLY need to update this. this is one of the best stories I have ever read on any fan fiction site. There is a ton of sex but you have added a plot as well without subtracting from the overall erotic presence this story has. I will be eagerly awaiting updates on this story in the future.
James
James
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story from the get go so pls pls pls contibue to write it don\'t stop as i like this story alot
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeehaa finally Molly gets a part in your story :)
I hope Harry will join Tonks and Molly
I hope Harry will join Tonks and Molly
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a strange story. There is still a missing chapter after Chapter One. I find everyones dialogue and characters very stiff.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter but I was a little disappointed with no Harry and his slaves as they are my favorite
I hope Harry starts becoming more forceful with Bella and has Narcissa go down on him in there common room and all that his slaves asked for
What happened to Narcissa & Bella asking for the more extreme sex slave spells the sex book kind of fell of the map
I like that you mentioned Harry reading the white magic book but could do with some more details about what he is learning
I hope Harry starts becoming more forceful with Bella and has Narcissa go down on him in there common room and all that his slaves asked for
What happened to Narcissa & Bella asking for the more extreme sex slave spells the sex book kind of fell of the map
I like that you mentioned Harry reading the white magic book but could do with some more details about what he is learning