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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot, very good, very interesting.
Thank you for continueing this.
More soon, please.
Thank you for continueing this.
More soon, please.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe that this last time Harry should\'ve carried out the punishment himself, since it seems like Ron and Neville did not impress it upon their respective partner to not anger their lord and master. Or, maybe you are saving it for the next time. Might I suggest some harsher punishment this time, maybe have Harry angeredso much this next time that he takes Ginny, or Luna, or both, to some bar or whatnot that he owns in Knockturn Alley and apply 10 lashed to their back, and then apply another 10 to their respective partner for not following his explicit orders to carry out the punishments he entrusted to them. Or something to that effect, maybe place a illusion spell, makes it seem more realistic without it being real. I really wish that Harry partake a larger part in their punishments. And I\'m starting to get annoyed at Hermione\'s slow pace, I\'m actually starting to agree with some of Pansy\'s ideas concerning her.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what can I say brilliant in concept & design please more chapters
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... the first chapter is cut off, would you mind emailing me a copy of it?
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay -- I really liked this chapter. A Lot.
We have some nice touching scenes of character growth as shown by the slow exploration of the boundaries of love between Harry and Hermione in the study. It\'s a scene that has no explicit sex, yet is very moving. It is a nice juxtaposition for the other scenes. Especially Hermione\'s Birthday present. Yet even then, the close of that scene has a nice touching moment between Harry and Hermione.
The next few scenes are quite interesting. First we have Hermione beginning to explore the more physical boundaries of their set limits. We have Ron foreshadow why Harry does not seem to know of Pansy\'s apparent seditious plans. We can see first hand the evidence of a willing Thrall in the responses made by Millicent to her master and mistress and their commands. This off-sets Pansy\'s words quite nicely. Pansy became a Thrall only to save herself. No other reason. All the other Thralls were taken either against their will (Narcissa and Bella) or quite willingly (Tonks and Millicent). Because of this, these girls appear to be quite content with their station in life. Not Pansy, though. Her Pure-Blood bigotry will not allow her to be anything but top-dog. But she of course cannot imagine anybody desiring somebody more than herself. Big mistake. I really liked the fact that Hermione wasn\'t going to wait for Harry -- she was in the act of raising her wand for a curse when Harry arrived. Having Harry
We have some nice touching scenes of character growth as shown by the slow exploration of the boundaries of love between Harry and Hermione in the study. It\'s a scene that has no explicit sex, yet is very moving. It is a nice juxtaposition for the other scenes. Especially Hermione\'s Birthday present. Yet even then, the close of that scene has a nice touching moment between Harry and Hermione.
The next few scenes are quite interesting. First we have Hermione beginning to explore the more physical boundaries of their set limits. We have Ron foreshadow why Harry does not seem to know of Pansy\'s apparent seditious plans. We can see first hand the evidence of a willing Thrall in the responses made by Millicent to her master and mistress and their commands. This off-sets Pansy\'s words quite nicely. Pansy became a Thrall only to save herself. No other reason. All the other Thralls were taken either against their will (Narcissa and Bella) or quite willingly (Tonks and Millicent). Because of this, these girls appear to be quite content with their station in life. Not Pansy, though. Her Pure-Blood bigotry will not allow her to be anything but top-dog. But she of course cannot imagine anybody desiring somebody more than herself. Big mistake. I really liked the fact that Hermione wasn\'t going to wait for Harry -- she was in the act of raising her wand for a curse when Harry arrived. Having Harry
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and I am happy to see it moved over here. Although I felt it would be difficult to outdo the first chapters, you still manage to get furthur into increasing the excitement.
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent!
Ron/Luna bits where great!
Ron/Luna bits where great!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta wonder why a story called Harry Potter and the Sisters Black seems to focus more on Hermione, and the relationships of everyone EXCEPT Harry and the Sisters Black (mainly Hermione, though). It really is annoying, to no end. The title is so misleading that it isn\'t even amusing. It makes it sound like the Black sisters are the main relationship (which is what I thought coming in), when they\'re not. Instead HERMIONE is a main factor, instead of the people in the title of the story. Why not call it something more like, uh...
Hermione Granger and the Using of the Servants of Lord Potter (and occasionally some other people show up, too)
Yeah, I think that would be more apt a name than what you have now. After all, Harry does pretty much whatever she wants, and everyone just assumes she is his equal. She more or less tells him what to do, anyway.
Sorry if that sounds mean, but I came into this expecting to see a relationship between Harry Potter and the Black Sisters... not Harry Potter and Hermione (who have more or less taken complete DOMINATION of this story), and anyone else who can manage to attach themselves to him.
Hermione Granger and the Using of the Servants of Lord Potter (and occasionally some other people show up, too)
Yeah, I think that would be more apt a name than what you have now. After all, Harry does pretty much whatever she wants, and everyone just assumes she is his equal. She more or less tells him what to do, anyway.
Sorry if that sounds mean, but I came into this expecting to see a relationship between Harry Potter and the Black Sisters... not Harry Potter and Hermione (who have more or less taken complete DOMINATION of this story), and anyone else who can manage to attach themselves to him.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing and rolls around on the floor* oh that last part was too good.......I almost had tears in my eyes! That was a good way to end another great chapter, your sense of humor could pass for some of my friends! Weird as they are, anyway I can\'t wait til next Thursday for the next chapter.
Kitty
Kitty
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahaha very amusing i love this work i lovw it so much that i ahve read it over adn over again as it is really good and i love the plot line and how you are conducting the story along. I also love the way each chapter is so long and not short like most stories that i admore as it measn you took time to actualy do your best. Pls if you could direct me to any more harry potter beatrix narcissa fanfiction i would be most grateful. As always pls continue to write adn pls update soon
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your truly,
one of your biggest fans