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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erg... What happened in chapter 1? It get cut off and then like a cliffhanger but then in chapter two it jumps to vernon yelling? and Jeez.. Reading this was a pain. I had the same stupid formating problem on my fics where the sentences are all distorted so you have to move across the screen with the scroll. Very annoying.
Bella lickin Narc\'s bum was DAMN hot.
Bella lickin Narc\'s bum was DAMN hot.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The whole time I kept thinking \"he had a fantasy about his AUNT?\" i WAS LIKE.. ew... she was always described as this skinny, long necked, horsed face woman who\'s treated him like crap for most of his life and he had a fantasy about her? Jeez. You sure did make Harry a friggin\' weirdo.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. Just a little thing I saw in chapter 23: You translated
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please update soon! I need to read more, more, more.....*drool* e-mail me please whenever you get the chance to update!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would appear Harry is beginning to take his role seriously. I wonder if Bella will voice her objections over public displays.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good and amusing to read.... tho a few minor things like the lemons are unique but too short.. and its a bit much th D/s .... Is everybody in the wolrd into it for you ??? lol
still i like the characters you chose for harrys Harem makes for nice mental images..
still i like the characters you chose for harrys Harem makes for nice mental images..
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, I\'m not much for the Ron and Neville scenes.
I just like the Harry/Allthegirls scenes =)
I just like the Harry/Allthegirls scenes =)
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Luna\'s ideas runs to the exotic, don\'t they? :D
Looking forward to the Cho-bit now.
Write more.
Looking forward to the Cho-bit now.
Write more.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Gold buttplugs?!? that screams Austin powers and goldmember. Will you be showing us all the features of the buttplug? It would be cool if it could suddenly grow into a penis not unlike a strap-on. or it could grow into a dildo and enter the other hole as well. It could also have flashing lights.
Why not have the buttplug also squirt something into the ass on command. could be water, honey or.... whatever.
Great story
Why not have the buttplug also squirt something into the ass on command. could be water, honey or.... whatever.
Great story
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter -- Character development and story advancement, What more could one ask for? Oh, yeah, we also had some \"action\" as well.
I like the interchange between Dumbledore and Harry. it really shows the growth of the two. With Dumbledore being confused as to what he had done to incur Harry
I like the interchange between Dumbledore and Harry. it really shows the growth of the two. With Dumbledore being confused as to what he had done to incur Harry