rate_review Reviews

OMG what a great story shame it had to come to an end thou i LOVED it

See, now I'm only up to chapter six, I will read the rest later, but there are a few things I thought needed to be said. Now I'm not criticizing you or your story, I think it's brilliantly written. But I just wanted to say, if ever since he was five, Draco has loved his father in a sexual way, then how could he ever love another person in that way, as we love our parents forever, especially when it is sexually pleasing. He wont ever want anyone else because it's been 'programmed' into him from a very young age. If Lucius had never touched Draco, they might never have loved each other in a more than platonic way. And how does Draco fully know that this love he feels for his father is not platonic love which has been distorted and corrupted by Lucius stealing his innocence? I find this pairing a very controversial and interesting pair to read, I like the pairing, but I also get riled up about the emotional implications and complications. It annoys me to an extent, but at the same time I like to read the pairing. I think it must just be my twisted mind. Part of me thinks its wrong, and the other thinks they are hot together and if they love each other that's all that matters. Then the other part of my head that thinks its wrong says, well how do we know they do actually love each other? Because Draco was so young when they started that he could be corrupted into thinking this is what he wants, when he might not actually, or he could only want this because of his father's actions. It's a hard situation to deal with, that's why incest is mainly illegal.

But anyway that's my rant. Like I said earlier, I think this story is really well written, and I like the touch of adding Narcissa finding out and trying to keep them apart but not succeeding. I'll read the rest and leave another review (this time rant-free) about what I thought of those chapters too.
Good job,
~gorgeousbowneyes

Well, you have gotten so many hits, but not many review so I thought I would... It was really well written, even if the subject matter was a bit disturbing. Does that really happen?? The children enjoy it? Huh. Well you are a really good writer and I am going to check out what else you have written

Strangely erotic. OK, extremely erotic. Have to think about this more.

original and extremely well written! what a great fic!

Guh. So fucking hot. So, so, SO hot.

*creeps off to do...stuff.*