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i absolutely loved it all, i can\'t wait for the next chappie, its perfect lol, it can make me laugh and feel sad, simple perfect
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*snickers* Poor Sevvy! Welcome to fatherhood! Draco asking Sevvie for advice is typicial teenage thing...As for Remus, well it\'s kinda late for that, since Dudley is Serena\'s biological father...Obviously no one gave Dudley the talk about protection...I cannot see Petunia doing it, but Vernon should have bothered to do it...As for Serena, well, deep down Dudley probably knew he was a wizard, and magic calls to magic. So somehow Serena\'s mom and Dudley were drawn to each other...And the rest is history. But Serena should have a happier childhood. Even if Dumbledore pulls something. But, pls have Dudley and Harry draw up a will, so Dumbledore cannot pull something! I wouldn\'t put it past him to pull something, if he found out about Serena...A will that is CLEARCUT about where Serena goes to! And NO loopholes that will allow Dumbledore to pull one of his stunts such as turning Serena in the next Voldemort...I hope whereever Lily and James are they are watching over Harry, Dudley and Serena...Since they are the innocents in this stupid war...And they\'ve suffered the most. Ex-Harry were placed with the Dursleys. Granted Petunia was memory-charmed, and Dudley were suffering from spells/memory charms. But what Vernon did were all him! And Dudley never knew about his magic until it was almost too late for him! As for Serena she would have gone to an orphanage, if Harry hadn\'t found out about her!

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Too wonderful! Can\'t wait for chapter 23!

*winces* Hoo boy! The shit\'s gonna hit the fan! Question: was that prophecy the real thing, or did Dumbledore mess around with the prophecy? *muses* I think someone needs to talk with Trelawney, if she is alive, and find the original prophecy! Prehaps Harry should try talking to the centaurs or the other magiical creatures...*shrugs* Remember, there are prejudice in the wizarding world, so the magical creatures always get overlooked, and they\'re bound to know things others doesn\'t...Ex-3rd book, Crookshanks knew who \'Scabbers\' was all along! Sirius called Crookshanks brillant, and he said that the cat knew \'Scabbers\' wasn\'t what he seemed to be. *muses* A pity Harry cannot talk with Fawkes and question him...*deep in thought* Harry why doesn\'t you make Dudley honorary godfather of Serena? If sometihng happens to Ron, Dudley can step up to the plate, besides, he should be done with school by then, \'less Dumbledore pulls sometihn,g like another so-called prophecy...I still think he\'s hiding something! Such as exactly WHAT KIND OF POWER does Harry have to defeat Voldemort?!

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That was a great chapter!! I loved it!! Please update soon!!!

That was great plz continue right away!

I love this story... please update soon. I can\'t wait to hear Harry\'s reaction.
~Reba

Ok this story is awsome and everything but it is Harry/Draco, i mean i seriously love this story i just wish you would add more Harry and Draco into it!!