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for Baby Serena

by moonstonemystyk

person Sailor Sol (too lazy to sign in)
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Go get him, Molly!

I like the way this is working out, but I'd like more details on the arrangement with the Ministry. Also, I can't WAIT to see what happens when Ron sees that Harry and Draco are getting along. Hermione and Ginny will fall in love with the baby, but I think that Ron is baby-proof.
person Jewel
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
talk about able to handle it! sheesh, remind me never to get in molly's way
love it!
update asap please
person EmeraldGrey
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Touching story Luv.
I really love it!
I want to know what the big deal of going back to the Dursley's was too?
I like how you have made baby Serena the *bridge* to D/H and it's sooooooo sweet!
I am wondering how Harry will cope with Classes and a daughter? Er, he is calling her that right? I mean, she looks like him and all.ll Dll Draco carry over this loving protectiveness once back at Hogwarts?*
GO Molly! That was refreshing. Most fics have her mousey, *screamy and yelling but no where near the backbone you've given her. A whole new dimension to her character.
Can't hardly wait for Chapter 7!
More soon, yeah?
EmeraldGrey
person fragonknight01
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yeah! Go Molly... I just love kick-ass bitches. It's my greatest ambition to be one. Now hurry up and tell me why Albus is so stuck on sending Harry back to the Dursley house.
person emaleth57
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Keep them coming!
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh hurry with Chapter 6! That was evil leaving it like that! More! Remus and Sirius took it well. Though Remus thought the child was y's.y's. Why does she look so much like him if she's Dudley's?
person Drey
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing! This story is getting good.
person R
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! I liked that little tender moment between Harry and Draco, simple but sweet!! I can't wait for more! Keep up the great work and PLEASE update soon!!!
person R
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!! I can't wait for more!! PLEASE update soon and keep up the great writing!!
person emaleth57
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I wonder what Harry is going to do witrenarena when school starts again? Is she going to Hogwarts with him? I guess I will ahve to wait and see. *sigh* It is so hard to be patient.
I am a bit jealous of Snape for the eye full he got when he fire-called Remus and Sirius. teehee

Great job! Hope the next Chapter will be posted soon!