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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this alot. It was really good.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This comment has SPOILERS for the fic.
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So wonderful, sweet and romantic!
It\'s like you two have somehow read a list of exactly what I want in a Snape/Harry story, and decided to fulfill all my wishes, *including* some thoughtful and sensitive treatment of consent, and triggers of anxiety.
The way that Severus did not automatically like everything Harry did to him while dominating him made it all the more believeable when he did enjoy it.
I am also very happy with the way you handled the Voldemort-provoked rape. I have a hard time suspending my disbelief, and keeping myself from feeling horror and revulsion when reading about rape, even when I know it\'s supposed to be a harmless fantasy in a kinky fic. But I trusted you, because I had read the beginning of your other fic, and I was prepared because of your warning - thank you for that!
It was a very clever way of offing Voldemort, I must say :-)
I liked that they didn\'t even realize what their love had done to him, until Remus told them.
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So wonderful, sweet and romantic!
It\'s like you two have somehow read a list of exactly what I want in a Snape/Harry story, and decided to fulfill all my wishes, *including* some thoughtful and sensitive treatment of consent, and triggers of anxiety.
The way that Severus did not automatically like everything Harry did to him while dominating him made it all the more believeable when he did enjoy it.
I am also very happy with the way you handled the Voldemort-provoked rape. I have a hard time suspending my disbelief, and keeping myself from feeling horror and revulsion when reading about rape, even when I know it\'s supposed to be a harmless fantasy in a kinky fic. But I trusted you, because I had read the beginning of your other fic, and I was prepared because of your warning - thank you for that!
It was a very clever way of offing Voldemort, I must say :-)
I liked that they didn\'t even realize what their love had done to him, until Remus told them.
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story, but I really *really* liked the author\'s note at the end. Thanks, guys.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Phew! Slowly but surely catching up on my reading! There are so many things to say about this story I hardly know where to begin. I loved seeing Harry dominate the sexual situations even with men much older than himself. Very interesting. I don\'t think I\'ve seen that done quite so well before. I also found Remus\' protectiveness towards Snape very touching here. Harry\'s respect for Snape\'s weaknesses was also a nice touch (his feet, etc.) and I laughed out loud when he remembers what happened when he forgot once. Overall, a wonderful story that I enjoyed very much. I\'m looking forward to reading more from both of you as always!
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll say again how much I LOVE this story... that 7th chapter was very hot... but anyway.
I liked the way you added the rape hotlines in the 8th chapter. It was a good idea for those poor souls suffering through terrible abuse and... yeah.
Ok, I\'m really tired, so I\'m going to go now, but I LOVE this story.
I liked the way you added the rape hotlines in the 8th chapter. It was a good idea for those poor souls suffering through terrible abuse and... yeah.
Ok, I\'m really tired, so I\'m going to go now, but I LOVE this story.
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love this sooooo much! Such a sweet happy ending... I LOVE IT!!!!
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think i would like this story cause all the stories i read b4 containing BDSM handled it very poorly. I was glad then that if handled properly BDSM can be just as good as any other story so thank you.
Dominate Harry! is HOT, but submissive Sev! is even better.
I'm going to go find 'dry' underpants now.
Dominate Harry! is HOT, but submissive Sev! is even better.
I'm going to go find 'dry' underpants now.
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November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please, please, please, tell me that Remus will at join our boys for at least one night, pretty please
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I had my doubts. However, as I am a huge fan of both of you, I took the plunge and read it. Darn it all! You have made this plausible! I applaud you. Both Severus and Harry are believable. Bravo! I look forward to the next installment. A fan again...CC
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did i ever tell u that i love u!!..this is fucking awsome!!! plez update soon!!! i beg u!!!