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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that i love this sooooooo freakin' much. I find the defensive Draco so cute, trying to ignore his feelings. Great job in making it all believable, most do not actually write the clumsiness of sex and i find that you do it well without too much embarrassment. I love it!
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Jenn
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Jenn
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i finally finished the seven chaps! oh finally lol. i love this story and it is coming along nicely! oh i hope you update soon. i wont have to worry now that i am caught up lol. i cant wait till wednesday either lol. i hope you update soon.!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn Snape! Thank goodness for McGonagal! And Hermione suspects something but at least she just thinks its friendship. And how does Draco feel about Harry? He doesn't know? Can't wait for chapter 8!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still laughing over some lines from chapter two. I love the characterization of Draco, his little quips. I loved the line about it only being the second date and he hadn't even been take out to dinner! Also, the line where Snape asks what his father would say and he replies with "help, help, I'm in Azkaban and my son is a fag!" Harry is great as naive and needy. Keep up the great dialogues!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINISH!!!! For the love of gods, please finish!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Chapter 6 had me laughing! No sex Harry says and then just what was he going to do? *shakes head*
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 6. No sex? This should be good. What do they talk about? Are the teachers really that stupid or are they trying to help?
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapters 3, 4 and 5 and all I can say is wow! That was hot! I absolutely love your Draco. What comes out of his mouth is priceless. I cracked up more than once. Excellent work. I can't wait for more.
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how you write their little fights, it's so in character. I dunno, it's how I picture they'd be together. I love seeing new chapters from you, you must update more. =D You're a great writer.
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October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved Chapter 4! Though I hope Draco doesn't need to sit on a broom anytime soon!