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for Change My World

by psychocatblah

person ksevfansd
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an exceptional story. It is a brilliant mix of humor and angst. I look forward to more.
person Nekohime
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was just amazing and beautiful in every way.. I don\'t know of I reviewed your story yet but if I haven\'t... let me just say.. my god...

you are awesome.. That last chapter. (loaded 10/28/04) was just heartbreakingly wonderful. I mean god you just seemed to capture the misery of Harry and Draco\'s emotion\'s perfectly.. and they way it was written.. the words that you used was like poetry...

Damn don\'t I sound like a dork?... let me sum this up the way I usually do..

THAT WAS FUCKING FANTASTIC! Take a bow you sure do deserve it..

you rule plain and simpl Ciao!

Neko\'s Rate: 5 stars!

person Anon
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME AWSOME
person R
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Great chapter, very intense! I think that was an awesome, if not emotional, way for Draco to see how much Harry really cared about him and to find out what Harry had been through in his life. I can\'t wait for the next chapter to find out what\'s in Draco\'s head! Keep up the brilliant work and PLEASE update soon!!!!
person Fefs
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O I\'m speachless.. Oh my God, you MUST update soon or you will be responsable for my madness!! Really, you are a genius! I love your fic!!! Congrats!
Hugs
person emaleth57
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, but how horrible for Harry and Draco. Oh well, I can deal with the angst as long as there is a happy ending (please make it end happily ever after!).
Next chapter please!
person HermioneWeasley
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!! OH MY GOSH!! I just got done reading all the chapters and then this cliff-hanger!! Oh goodness!! I can't wait for more. Must have more. What is going on?? I love the interaction between Draco and Harry. "You're my bitch and you know it." I love it. Great story by the way, on a whole. You must update soon and relieve my anxiety. Great job. Keep going. :)
person Dzee
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happened? I loved your characterizations, the snarky Draco and adorable Harry. But then you go all mushy and sappy on me. I personally find it quite hard to believe that Draco would just let Harry see him break down like that, especially after how Harry forced him into a corner earlier. Yes, he may have realized he loves Harry but I still feel that it goes against Draco's character. Plus it seems a bit too easy. Fortunately the last line gives me hope of some interesting twist.
person charlottesometimes
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Draco didn't -let- Harry see anything. He was pinned under him. As in immobilized. He wasn't going anywhere and he had little he could do other than to tell Harry the truth. He could have lied, but what would be in it for him? Harry just would've stormed off and that would have been that. And if you missed that Draco felt something for Harry from chapter 1, then you missed a lot.
person Shenoa
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, PLEASE update soon. Can't wait to read more. Talk about a cliffhanger . . .