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for Change My World

by psychocatblah

schedule July 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really liked this story. It was well written and kept me interested the entire way. Good job.

schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh i love this. I love the personalities an how everyone interactes with each other. I love the passionant, cute, kinky sex.
person 4inukag4
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so it took me three days of around four hours a day, but I finished this. I happen to LOVE how you worked this out. I absolutely adored the "sweet" sex scene, and I am happy with your ending. Now... off to read the sequel!!

OokamiMomo
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found this story on LiveJournal in the Smutastic Awards Community.

Oh my goodness. ^.^ Well of course the beginning chapters had me in all sors of giggle fits, all of their detentions so wonderfully ended. While I sometimes disliked how Harry handled some of the situations, I immensely loved Draco throughout this story. The banter was so wonderful. Excuse me while I jump around from scene to scene that I liked.

First of all, I really wish Snape had gotten caught or fired or something. Honestly, it was perverse. Especially to make Lucius get killed by Harry, to create a rift between Harry and Draco. Which no one will ever know about. Still, I loved how you turned the tables on Snape, his story showing his selfishness.

That underwater scene was amazing! I read it, again on the Community, and I was just in complete awe of how you handled that situation for the boys.

I like how the conclusion linked to the first chapter. Beautiful job. Having all these horrible things happen after words of love was horrible, and I am totally glad for this happy ending. It was sad that you killed Narcissa off, but I'm glad you had Draco kill Lucius in what he saw as the most painless way possible.

You did a great job with their separate characters and relationship in this story. Wonderful job with this story. I enjoyed it immensely.
person Fate-Angel
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story as always. I really love your work!
Prefect smut, by the way, really hot.

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schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story made me feel so warm and fuzzy, thank you for righting it... the only time i felt scared to read it was when Malfoy Sr. was in Draco's room after Harry left.....BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a damn good story. I absolutely love it.
person AzureSkye
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories.
person emma
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
perfect ending to a perfect story! this is definitely one of my favorites :]]
you are a fantastic writer
person kj
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
forget what i said in my first review. THIS IS BLOODY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE AND THE STORY IS GREAT SO FAR!!!!!!!! however, i just wanted you to know that the first chapter is cut off at the end. just thought you should know.