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for Lifeline

by PlanetPluto

person Essence
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought your story interesting. I was hoping to make a request. Could you pair Draco/Hermione and make like Harry or Ron evil and have Draco protect Hermione. Just a thought
person Draco's Whore
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like ur story, i have a request though. Here are the rules:
Hermione is a prostitute,
Draco needs a girl at his beck and call,
must include oral,
one full night of i can't stop fucking,
okay so email me if ur up to the challenge.
person June
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gads, you're good!! Hermione-Draco isn't my favorite pairing, but you make it hot! (I can always pretend it's Severus instead of Draco.) How long does it take you to write a one-shot? Each of your stories is different and very creative. More, more! (Umm, can you do another Snape-Hermione, or Snape-Tonks?)
person Creepy Susie
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo
this is really hot
I love Hermione and Draco, becuase it's so... unexpected
But my absolute favourite ship is Harry and Hermione
I hope you could make a one shot with them.
Great story
Kudos to you
person carolyn
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was SUCH a hot one-shot smut. No kidding; all that talk of possession was a turn on. Tag me a D/s obsessive freak. And of course, the ficlet wouldn't have been so hot without good writing to go along with it!