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for Lifeline

by PlanetPluto

person high
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats great but you should realy do some with more hermione and two guys that would be awsome like snape hary ron draco or even tom
person t
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its sweet
good!!
person 0o0itznitelite
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o0oooo weee... i likeeee da parinin of draco n hermionee!!!!! make another storiee of dem pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, love your style!
person mona
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i loved it! acually i would love to see something with pansy and draco (not together in a relationship because pansy is strictly gay but both agree they both have a thing for hermione and plan to do something about it) trapping hermione (unwilling at first)in a closet and doing naughty things to her and with her although they don\'t have to force her after a while because she becomes willing after they get her all wound up. then she starts up a secret relationship with both without the other knowing at first. then choses draco because pansy also has someone that she was cheating on with hermione. i hope that makes sense but i would really love it! i\'ll keep checking this review page to see if you wanted to do it as well. thanks lol :D
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely..like that a lot.So, how about some evil Lucius smut preferably with either Hermione or Ginny? That would be great!
person Narcissa Black
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing a lot. Stark, but emotional. You did ask, so here\'s my fantasy. Draco, Hermione, Blaise and...Ginny. Two sets of best friends, in Draco\'s London flat for the night. A truth game, no dares, then more interesting games. No slash, no dominance, no other characters.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo...I LOVE this pairing.
please make a sequel like you did with Train Ride!!!!
make it 5 or ten years down the road...they could still be in love or not or whatever.
Just a request. anyways, it was great!
person G.A.G(Good As Gold)
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
person gryfforin
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this and I must say I'm somewhat surprised I did. When I first started reading the style it's written in is much more clipped for lack of a better word than what I tend to read. But I thought it was very effective and well done....

great job