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for This Moment

by RediF

schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"... as Lucius stretched languidly like a cat" That's a great line!
person jasrey
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nyeh. it was okay
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, love the way you wrote it.
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, the ending was awesome. I really liked how you phrased that. ^_^
person Elric Maxwell
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I wouldn't have a fuckin' clue on what to do if I was in Patsy's shoes...hot, nonetheless! I know it's a one-shot, but man, I can't help but wonder if she would divorce Draco or not. Maybe get one more kid, and that's it, I guess.... It's still a good fic! EM
person Mitamay
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* sorry for botching up her name...Pansy...I keep wanting to say Patsy! EM
person afraid.of.reality
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful <3 write more!! i know its the end...write eny more storys?
person killerthecat
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your review. Just to let you know a beta and spellcheck were employed. However, I have yet to fix this fic since AFF.net first starting having technical difficulties. The mangled words in this fic are a product of that.
person Puppy
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a good story, but PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD use spellcheck and a beta.