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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I loved this fic. It was so good! Lucius, in particular, was deliciously in character. I actually laughed aloud when I read these parts:
"Don't think of it as accepting my help," she said wryly. "Think of it as taking advantage of me."
He pursed his lips thoughtfully and then nodded once before taking her hand.
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At any rate, that selfsame honour now demanded that he admit he might owe her a small debt.
Finally, he decided that he would give her the information about Potter and then offer to assist her in obtaining revenge. It occurred to him that she might consider herself too noble for such a petty thing as retribution, but he abandoned that thought quickly. She was a woman. She would want vengeance.
Furthermore, he was still so bored. With the proper orchestration, this could prove to be very amusing, indeed.
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He smiled. "Perhaps we'll work on your threats, as well. You still lack subtlety."
Well done!
"Don't think of it as accepting my help," she said wryly. "Think of it as taking advantage of me."
He pursed his lips thoughtfully and then nodded once before taking her hand.
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At any rate, that selfsame honour now demanded that he admit he might owe her a small debt.
Finally, he decided that he would give her the information about Potter and then offer to assist her in obtaining revenge. It occurred to him that she might consider herself too noble for such a petty thing as retribution, but he abandoned that thought quickly. She was a woman. She would want vengeance.
Furthermore, he was still so bored. With the proper orchestration, this could prove to be very amusing, indeed.
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He smiled. "Perhaps we'll work on your threats, as well. You still lack subtlety."
Well done!
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it... This woukd be a great story to continue. You would not even need to put them together again. Maybe a reaction out of one Ginvera Weasley and Harry Potter about the new Hermione. I will say this again I loved it.