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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious! Although I would have liked to have seen Hermione go back to Harry for one last bit of revenge - show him what she can do now - then still say it is over!!!
This was well written - well done!
This was well written - well done!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a wonderful story. I loved the Slytherin in Lucius bringing out the Lioness in Hermione. Well done.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue? Either way is wonderful, but I greatly enjoy your Lucius. Mmm....
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just read ur story and i love it. sure it is complete? i would love to read additional chapters. this plot has so much potential. maybe u can change ur mind and write a little more about lucius and hermione and even servus? i would die for it.
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE BACK...and in MY fandom! I cannot tell you how happy it made me to see your story. Of course, reading it made me even happ In In character characters, arch dialogue and an actually believeable premise for LM/HG intimacy, all well written and beautifully paced. Absolutely delicious. And with that ending, I can pretend that Severus finally woke up and realized that HG was worth a second look and then...
I do hope there will be more fortcoming, soon, in whatever fandom you choose to dabble in next.
I do hope there will be more fortcoming, soon, in whatever fandom you choose to dabble in next.
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Just wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved this story. Not only did it sound well planned, you paced it well, and your style of writing kept the reader (me) reading. There's potential to rewrite it as multichapter if you want to make it smuttier (it is adultfanfic), or to write a sequal. You also wrote the characters well. When I get my own up, this story will definately be on my Recommended Reading list. I haven't read anything else by you yet, but if you have other that I like, I promise to put you on my Favourite Authors list.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is this was outstanding! I wish this was a series.
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so good...I'ed like to see the story continue. Wouldn't it be interesting if Lucius can't forget her, and Hermione can't forget him....so they accidentally run into each other repeatedly.....and so on and so on.
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I think you wrote Hermione and Lucius both in character and I could picture every conversation between them happening. Well done.
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really a very nice ficlet
liked the idea and the style of him using her using him (especially her NOT being girly-squeamish...)
please do continue !
liked the idea and the style of him using her using him (especially her NOT being girly-squeamish...)
please do continue !