rate_review Reviews

I love the ending. It was just so eloquent in its simplicity. There was no need for extra flourishes or untrue declarations of love. Such frivolity does not go with the couple, and by not adding it you proved that some relationships work best undefined. I also appreciated the little peek you gave us into Ron's insight. Usually he is portrayed as a blubbering bafoon, but you created him into a complex character with an actual opinion and purpose. It would be interesting to see how Harry would be affected by his actions some time down the line. If you so desire to continue or write a sequel there will not be a lack of readers.

connie

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

It's one of the best (if not the best) HG/LM fics I've ever read. Although it's short it contains everything: it's funny, consistent, sexy and very well written.

One of my favourite scenes is when Harry comes to rescue Hermione from 'evil clutches' and the only thing he achieves is to put down her hair. Or Hermione scheduling a nap for a (ex) Death Eater. Or Lucius shattering the radio. Or Snape being protective in his own twisted way. Or Lucius asking Snape about Contraseptive Potions.Or enraging Ron. Or. Or. Or. This strory is just great!

The collaboration/competition between SS and LM is just brilliant, they are both intelligent but have extremely different characters and it just sparks. The use of Shakespeare... Everything is just exquisite.

I cannot wait for more stories from you, no matter which characters you decide to write about.

That was possibly the best stroy I've ever read. *bows* AMAZING job.

I enjoyed this story very much. Every character is written so well, almost perfect in manner and interaction. Exceptionally strong dialogues...this is a story i will definately be reading more often.

This has to be the 20th time I've reread this fic and I love it more every time. I really do wish that you could continue the story somehow-perhaps a chance meeting years later after Hermione has a few men under her belt? The dialogue is so perfect (especially Lucius) I can actually hear Jason Isaacs' slick delivery. And I perfectly agree with your final note-It is completely impossible for Lucius to be anything other than a Complete Sex God! -Sigh-I just wish he were mine!

Your dialogue and plot development are exceptional at best. I thoroughly enjoyed this one-shot. My congratulations to a great author. If you ever write anything else, please do contact me. I will always be a willing audience.

"Thousands, I suspect. Most end tragically. Avoid those."

How true...what a lovely way for your readers to spend an evening. I truly enjoyed reading this, and wish you'd continue this somehow. Does she get to utilize these new skills, and with whom? I can use my imagination, but you do a sublime job of it, and I'd love to know what YOU think. ;)

Fabulously done...love love loved it!!!

Becca

I must say that I dumbfounded and extremely impressed. First of all, your writing skills in general are fantastic - not to mention your obvious gift for writing HG/LM. It is, by far, the best one I have ever had the privelage of reading. Although this may seem rash, I do have to seriously encourage you to write something and try to have it published. You deliver a natural flow with sophisticated language and managed to merry the two perfectly. Please don\'t stop writing... I\'ll definatly always read. Thanks for a fantastic story!

excellent story, but i would\'ve liked to see more of harry and ginny