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Don't end it here! How does Harry feel about Draco? Does he find out about the baby? Will he be there for him? What happens next? Harry has a right to know! He's always wanted a family!

How can you say one shot? Harry (prick) needs to find out about the baby and realize that he loves Draco. Draco and Harry need to get together and have their child (boy or girl?). We need to know what it is, how Harry reacts and what about Draco's family? Please continue.

Is this it????? Butbutbutbut, the plot was just starting! How bitter this ends. Poor bloke, he's life is full of fear and threats... He's really got no salvation. And of course, there's no gurantee that he would see his baby born in such situation. How sad...

Oh my! This is how it ends? Or rather starts and is btutally cut off? *lol*
I detect 2 plot holes here that are unresolved and the point of this fic gets quite confusing. (Or was it the point?) It's ok the whole fic is Draco's POV but what about Harry? There should have been a part for Harry's reasoning for choosing his archenemy, Dracohis his first intimate mate. And as a plain act of whim, if that was it mind you, Harry was waaaay too tender and caring it didn't really explain that it's his nature. Cause then if that is it, he wouldn't have left Draco behind and not even try to attempt at talking. So there's contradiction in Harry's charaterization.
Another one is why was the act with Harry so necessary in the first place if the the good part of the fic was centered in Draco's growing friendship with the slytherin blokes that in the whole fic didn't go too deep nor too trustworthy either. And after all, Draco ended up resenting Harry for getting him pregnant ant the threats that meant for him but hoping that the baby will love him? But he was just ranting he will surely get killed if Lucius and Voldemort found out in the beginning. That doesn't sound consistent.
So what was the point in all this jumble of emotions? Love, lust, friendship, fear or comfort? Cause it seems you touched all but didn't go anywhere.

Lovely. Any plans for the sequel?^_~

aw. i think harry cares. you should continue the story so that harry figures out what happening... please? cuz personally, although it was a well-writtening,ing, i thought that it sort of contradicted itself. mainly in the way that malfoy knew he was going to be killed for this and then turning around knowing the baby would love him.

woooo.. great job so far!

Awww, you can't stop there! That's not an ending!!! Don't evet met me started on the loose ends! Waaaaay to much unresolved conflict. Please say there's more! It was a good characterization of Draco I thought. Snarky, but human and lovable. Mooooooore!!!

Is this the end? I hope not! You have quite the start and I would love to read more.

ARE YOU NUTS?!
you cant finish it like that!!!
i want Harry to know about the baby
i want Draco and Harry to get together
i want to read about the child birth!!
continue this! please?