rate_review Reviews

Fantastic writing in addition to marvelous sex. Keep it up.

Good Job. Try to finish it please; it's really interesting.

omg, please keep writing. this fic is reall neat. i thought it was gonna be all cliche at first, but it wasnt really. yay!

Dude,

Write more, man. THis is good stuff, but get the girls more intimate with Harry. It would make an interesting piece and would allow The-Boy-Who-Lived become The-Boy-Who-Fucked. Keep it up.

Semper Fi, Navy man!

quite an enjoyable story and chapter - very vividly written
thanks - still anxiously looking forward to Power of Time - Hope RL will give your the time to write - stay safe on ship.

Really good chapter, lot of smutth and really hot, I like that they have lots of kinky stuff but nothing heavy, it think is more stylish.

I really hope that before you end this story you can give us something more on Hermione, she have been quiet and always in the stories the quiet girls are the wildest (maybe continuing the dares outiside the room?).

I will keep waiting for the next chapter soon, is a really good story.

JO

I hope, you have some good action planed with Harry and Hermione. It's getting awfully boring in this departure. I don't want to read about Parvati, Lavender and Ginny all the time. They are too willing ... too eager.

I think it is time, that Hermione gets fucked by Harry. Make it anal, too, and it would be perfekt.

Hi Ross! I am SO HAPPY you've finally added another chapter to the story, and I still can't wait for the rest of the story. I've really been enjoying Power of Time, but this one is my absolute favorite!!! You deserve a happy life at home with a loving woman to give you all the attention you need, but PLEASE stay at sea until you get this story done!!! I know you think it's a "guy's story" ... imagining yourself (or your male readers imagining themselves) in Harry's place, but if I could take the place of one of the girls in this story, I'd think I'd died and gone to heaven!!! I think I'd like to be either Ginny or Hermione as my gut feeling (and my hope) is that one of them (or both of them) will get the grand prize. You mentioned the chat in group, and I may not make it because of work, but just in case I can, where do I find it? Could you post instructions in the group for us newer members?

That was hot nice work.

Aww man that was the best bloody blowjob i've ever read. (I can't believe i wrote that.) Navy life makes for great smut i see. A coupla weeks after the Phillipines your writing will no doubt be spectacular. Looking forward to it already. Keep it up:-)
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