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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!! I realize you're probably in the Phillipines gazing at the eye-candy there but writing more will make a horde of people REALLY happy here! Awesome story by the way. You make words seem erotic, but natural.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great all of my friends girls and guys got off on that dam good work >:)
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh BoBS. How fantastic. I'm really looking forward to the next couple of installments!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you so so much! I read this so long ago but never forgot it, every so often trying to find it to check for updates. Thank you sooooooooooooo much for that delicious chapter and please continue to the end.
I know what you mean about finishing things. After a long break from writing fanfic I am back to finish what I'd started.
Bravo, once more. Good work, keep it up (pun intended)!
I know what you mean about finishing things. After a long break from writing fanfic I am back to finish what I'd started.
Bravo, once more. Good work, keep it up (pun intended)!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope to read more soon! It's really well written, love it!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have read. I am generally a Draco fan and and typically don't read anything else but this has got me completly hooked! Your style is so refreshing. I love that every thing isn't fairy tale perfect and the charcters actually have real life imperfections when it comes to their bodies and the acts themselves. The only thing that I have found disappointing is how much of a bitch Hermione is still being but I guess your going to have that from time to time. But it just adds to the likeness of reality(not everybody can be cool). So please keep it coming because I am dying with anticipation of just how far things will go, especially with Harry and Ginny!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great piece of writing, best ive read in a LONG time. Very descriptive and thorough, which is a Major plus. And great work on using so many synonyms for the same words, kept things fresh.
You have to keep this going to the end, you REALLY MUST KEEP GOING, NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS @___@
You have to keep this going to the end, you REALLY MUST KEEP GOING, NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS @___@
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliently done Ross. I'm guessing for the next chapter that a female may get oral. I hope you are doind well on ship.
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, every blokes dream. Really glad your carrying this on and I'm looking forward to the last two chapters. Keep up the good writting.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I CAN NOT BELIEVE THIS STORY IS SO HOT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME THAT SOMETHING IS GOING TO HAPPEN BETWEEN HARRY AND HERMIONE THOUGH AS I LOVE THAT COUPING ITS JUST SO PERFECT