rate_review Reviews

I don't usually review what I read, (I'm not really sure why) but I just had to say that this chapter was definitely one of the most arousing things I have ever read. I found it quite humorous that Harry couldn't do anything while he was being subjected to all of the 'torture'. And also, on a side note, when is poor Hermione going to get in on some fun. She is probably starting to feel a little neglected by now. lol...j/k Anyhow, great story! very erotic! gotta love it!

First of all, let me say that you are one of the best authors i have read, excluding published ones ( though you beat some of them too). It is a big hope of mine that you decide you like writting adult oriented fiction, wether smut-fest or even slower than this. I really like your style, and agree with most of your beliefs on erotic fics. 2 things though. either AFF's really screwed up, (again), or you need to run spell check BAD. I think it might bee AFF though as many stories i read to day had words frappsefdsafdsioa'ed. Also, Give harry a better time by having the girls cast an ereagtion spell,doing away with those multi male orgasm impossibilities. Although useually it's abused, I thing an erection spell, if properly used, could allow more "fun" without bieng tacky. I hope hell get with them all at least once (excluding maybe the 2 lsbians -or are they bi?-). I'll keep reading and say more if i think of any. Plz make more stories, you have a talent, save us from the 'authers' with wham bam thank you mam styles! bye.

Wonderful story! You have done an amazing job with it and I just LOVE it! Keep up the good work and post chapter 6 soon please! XoXo Muah

Turned out to be the best HP-FF I ever read :)
Please go on writing as soon as aff is working properly again ;)
THX alot

Well well well, if this cirtainly doesn't take the cake in reminding me of my own high school games of truth or dare! I'm unabashedly enjoying this fic, and look forward to where you'll take it next!

In response to your comment to another person's... review. This may have been written to "turn on a guy" from your point of view, but don't you think we get off on this kind of stuff too? I could be completely straight or completely a lesbian, and I'd still be turned on!

Too bad petrificus isn't possible out here in muggle society... I'm sure I could find a fun way to use it!

Keep up the fun stuff, Ross - it's quite entertain


~Paige

Wow, that was hot. Excuse me while I go in a corner for some... alone time.... Hehe... Anyway. Very good. Nicely well written. I was amused when reading your reviewer responses. Girls with Bisexual fantasies... Well yeah. How can we not fantasize about smooth, satiny skin caressing our own, beautiful breasts to worship and adore, and long, feathery hair to tickle us into orgasm? Or maybe that is just me...

Chapter 5 (Harry's Hard-on) gave me a hard-on, lol. Please don't leave us hanging for a whole week, I really want to read about Ginnys dare!

Ross!

Obviously written by a male... I cracked up at your response - one dick is enough! hehehe. You no likie to share!

If I were a man in that situation, I wouldn't want to share er. r. But then again, I don't like to share my MAN....

In regard to the girl on girl, it's not a biggie to me. My husband has long since gotten me past my blusing of women grinding and macking on each other...LOL. (Rolling eyes) He does LOVE girl on girl and happily applaudes it.

I didn't find anything demeaning about the story thus far. I do find it very well written and stimulating. But, here's the caviot - I WANT TO READ SEX BABY!

Harry having sex and having fun with all the girls. I don't mind him having multiple partners, just more women's perspectives to imagine from! (cheeky grin)

Personally, I don't see Ginny as being attracted to women, but that's just me. I always see her as strictly a guy girl...more importantly, usually Harry is the apple of her eye.

But, I digress.

What I didn't like about the chapter? eh...a little too much of the bump and grinding on poor Harry. He needs to get into the action too.

And, regarding Hermione - Take it from a woman, who has had a very attractive man as her best friend all during high school and beyond...I don't CARE how prim and proper you are (which I was)...If you have a HOT guy in your bed and you're a horney teenage girl - FRIEND OR NOT - you're going to have a response to him. Especially, I think, if he's a friend. Women LOVE being turned on by a guy's intellect, by their sensitivity. We feed on sharing their emotions and finding out what makes them tick.

Harry to me would be an ultimate turn on if I were Hermoine. First he's powerful as well as vulnerable - lethal combination for girls. He's fiercely protective of her and Ginny for that matter. He would die for them - another HUGE turn on. She knows what makes him tick....Did I forget to mention the Green Eyes and Black Hair - oh yeah and he's athletic.... She'd do him. The alchol would just serve to open the feelings she would normally have hidden under the layers of friendship.

Just my humble opinion. Being a girl - I know....

Hurry up and write more. By the way, is there a way to get email updates for when your next chapter is up?

Please let me know.

Thanks, looking forward to next chapter. Also - you didn't mention what other stories you are writing. I asked in my last review.

Cheers,

Lorett

CHAPTER 5 WAS JUST AWESOME! It was definitely the best chapter yet, but it would have been better if Hermione got in on the action too. For the Ginny dare coming up in the next chapter I hope that Lavender and Hermione get some more action (Parvati too). I don't think I can wait another week for an update so I hope you can update really soon!

Hey, I love your fic. It's awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Wow is all I can say.