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person Skip
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Yeah! Damn, that was great! Keep it up! You\'re right, who cares if he can remember it. He is experiencing it. One lucky dude.
person jeannehaymar
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god ! This is so hot .... Definitely getting me all hot and bothered. I find it totally unfair to leave Hermione\'s knickers on... especially for a die hard H/Hr shipper as myself... I am sure you will not let us down (pun intended) on that.

Regarding one of your comments on multiple orgasms for Harry. It is definitely possible for a young man of 17 to ejaculate at least three or four times during a night, especially if he has had no release for a few days.

I find these chapter getting more and more exciting. You really have a lot of talent (and not only for the smut .. PoT is great too)

JH
person Amit
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, I liked the way you eventually got Hermionie to stop arguing, and the use of Parv\'s knickers..... that was pure genius. Keep it up.
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Your story is very stimulting, tastful, and with insight of the books charicters as they move around in a game of adult activities.
This the most entertaining Truth or Dare story I\'ve ever read
person blackelf23
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was very swee and very well written. I can\'t wait to see what will happen to Harry in the later chapters!! :P
person Lara
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Its about time the action got a little heavier, although I am tired of Lav and Pavarti. I want more G/H/HR especially HR/H. Well done! I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work!
person blackelf23
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol, this is starting to get pretty hot!! I\'m really liking this story!
person blackelf23
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woa, that was really, really, HOT! Awesome description and detail!
person FenrisWolf
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, somehow I missed updates on this, so I got to read three new chapters at once. This is by far and away one of the hottest pieces of PWP erotica (I hate the term smut) I\'ve ever read, and as a portkey reader and author, I\'ve read a lot! The inventiveness and imagination with which you describe the developing action between all the participants is nothing short of awe-inspiring. You may not consider erotica to be your forte, but you do a masterful job with it nonetheless. Now all this needs to be the perfect story (from my admittedly biased point of view) is for Hermione to refuse to take no for an answer from Harry, so that both she and Ginny can benefit from his attentions. Looking forward to the rest of this!
person Natasha
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this chappie!! Ginny is such a lucky girl to have gotten that dare!!