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And I completely agree with Lorett! I\'m good friends/go to school with some of the hottest guys I have ever laid eyes on (besides celebrities, but COME ON!), and if I was drunk and had them naked in my bed...I\'d jump their bones before you could count to three, baby! And I, like Hermione am a bit uptight and studious, too, but that doesn\'t stop me from being a GIRL (a horny one at that!).

So let Hermione loosen up a bit. Harry\'s gorgeous, and she should be reacting to that insanely. But I have to give you some credit--I love Hermione\'s little drunked tirade! GIVE HERMIE SOME ACTION!

<3 Hathor

that is so fucking hot. i can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Chapter 6 has finally moved this fic from PG-13 category past R into NC-17. It could have stayed in R, but the place where Hermione was held down by force is something not compatible with anything but NC-17. This fic sends a message that it is Ok to get drunk and engage into activities of sexual nature, and I wouldn\'t want my daughter reading that until she becomes of age.

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Wow, and worth the wait....need I say more.

Thank You! Great job.

Very hot, and quite interesting.

I look froward to the next part.

Ross,

OK, I see your point about Ginny perhaps getting interested in girls with SOOO many brothers around. But, once again, from a WOMAN\'S view, I think that\'s just a nice fantasy from a MAN\'S view. But it is your story - which is fantastic - and you can do what you please.

I\'m not complaining by any means. I think you\'re a GREAT writer and even though I am not interested in the female-on-female side of the story, I\'m TOTALLY INTO Harry doing all of them!

GOOD FOR HIM, he deserves it. Poor kid. After all the crap he\'s been through, he should get his brains bonked out. (Chuckle)

And, I thought this chapter was HOT. BUT, still no sex for Harry. That didn\'t count, dry humping... (Shaking head)

Also I must say I LOVE the heated little exchanges between Ginny and Harry....(Groan) I like them together and I think she\'s just what he needs, a little wildcat.

I am on pins-and-needles to see what Hermione does with Harry....oh god, please, please, please make it good and hot!

Since this is a SEX story, let\'s get busy! (Blushing at my boldness)

But, I WANT TO SEE HARRY DO HERMIONE AND GINNY. (sepeartely and if you so choose togther..whatever. But seperately for sure!) Geese I\'m demanding...(Grin, YOU DID ASK what I\'d like to see!)

Also, I am glad you thought what I said made sense between Hermione and Harry. And I caught what Hermes said too, \'If anyone deserved to be ravished by Harry it was her!\' I\'m paying attention. After reading your comments that made A WHOLE LOT of sense! (Grinning) Since I speak from personal experience on that front, having had a best male friend that I wanted DESPERATELY....

Anyway, great chapter. I must say it\'s AWFULLY fun talking sex with you!

Can\'t wait till next chappie. By the way I came across your POT story on Fanfiction.net where my story is. GREAT JOB! Fewwww you have something like 2400 reviews...IMPRESSIVE!

I\'ve started reading that too. I\'ll pop in and say hello over there!

Cheers,

Lorett

I was wondering, wouldn\'t Occlumency make it impossible to clear harrys mind? I think Occlumency would counteract the memory charm. It might come down to who\'s spell is stronger, the Occlumency or the memory charm, and I think harry is a slight bit more powerfull than they are..

I love your story, I just wish harry didn\'t have to forget..lol and some more harry/hermione moments would be nice, If you have to have harry forget, I think it would be funny for harry and hermione to confuss their feelings for each other and then harry forgets..lol

Wow! This is SUCH a great fic! Thank you for writing it and may you write LOTS more! You are a VERY good writer!

uh, wau. that was hot already. I like your way of describing things and action. I\'ve got nothing against Pot either with it being pc-13 but this story... really hot.
I have to wonder though what\'s up with all these weird writing errors? Like \'game of Truth of Dare had officiallgun gun now\'. Does aff.net mix it up or what \'cause those aren\'t the type one can actually write! And oh yeah, how DID harry get up the girls staircase? Doesn\'t any of the females have a broom? with hermione\'s spell to open the windows it would be so easy for Harry to get out but I guess that would moot the whole point. So I just have to stuff it and read on because this is one fic I won\'t quit *laughter*