rate_review Reviews

Ross ~

Thanks for keeping us updated. I was getting worried you abandoned the story. I know how RL can be, but I hope you can get an update in the coming weeks. I\'ll check back every day ...

thanks for filling us in. As you predicted in your update...I did think you updated, but I\'m ok that it\'s just an author note, atleast we know that you haven\'t forgotten. See ya.

For the first time ever I\'ve been tempted into reviewing a fic on here...Incredibly hot story. I\'m enjoying that you use a lot of description, not just about what they do, but about how the person reacts to having it done, something that is usually ignored in this type of fiction. The spacing out of dares is driving me insane...which I think adds to the overall appeal. As you really only are trying to blaze through this I won\'t bother you about spelling and grammar (although it makes me wonder exactly how incredible it would be if you DID take the time to go back through). Very inventive use of the characters by the way, not like any other girl-on-girl or truth or dare story I\'ve ever read (and I\'ve read my fair share).

Now, just one question...will you actually write more to this oh-so-awesome smutfest?

please....please....pretty please.....update.....could you.....please....I\'m asking nicely..... :(

ROSS - Tapping foot impatiently....YOU TOLD ME OVER A WEEK AGO...Actually I think it may be even close to 2 weeks ago now that you were going to post over this past weekend....Looking around....Lifting up the keyboard...checking behind the screen....

NOPE. The new chapter is NO WHERE TO BE FOUND...

What gives?

L

I first read this story long ago but lost the link. I just found it again (Yeah). Im glad to see updates since I last read but please update again soon. Im dying to find out what happens. Great Story by the way

awesome :P

Hey, Ross - if you\'re a good boy and update this story within two weeks, I\'ll tell you a really hot, true smut story from my life. ;)

Ceceng - a fan!

That is one HOT story Ross, hope that in time you will finish it. The story line flows well, and there some amazing scenes being played across my minds eye.................
However, as a Power of Time fan, please finish POT first! Just don\'t forget to come back to this one too.

WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!!?!?!?!???