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for Married Life

by yabo

person Persy
schedule August 30, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Hot yes, but soooo sweet!!!

person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person JJ
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!
person Sandy
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of my favorite PWPs! The whole fic is great, but the last line just makes it ROCK!
person footyfan
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great! Hoping for a sequel, or at least some more SS/HG action! Definitly agree-he\'s the fucking type, not the love making type!
person Betz
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For a first time with smut, you did a very good job. A little cliched in spots, but nothing that a little more practice writing will clear up. But definitely a very good first try for smut. Keep up the good work. This was hot.
person CAT
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good very senual and very different from most pwps i have read. a bit ornate but that actually worked out very well because it was snape after all, some of the dialogue seemed a bit unnesscary but over all i really enjoyed esspecially for its orgainal syntax
person spaz141
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of those PWPs that makes one smile (sweet in a raunchy kind of way). Thanks.
person eurydice's falling
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dayum! That was effin hot! I love the way they are both so enraptured with one another, but it doesn't change the core of their personalities. I also think your ending was just the sweetest thing ever.