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August 4, 2020 at 12:00 AM
I do like the stream of consciousness style of writing used here. It’s definitely not my favorite style, but it’s totally appropriate here. As always on this site, the piece needs some edits for misspelled, chopped up, merged, and mangled words. Yes, Beau, finish it. Harry & Gin deserve a good shag, and you do seem to know how to build up the sexual tension. Well done.
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story although it is hard to interpret who is saying what and there are numerous spelling errors and it
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...This is good without a plot...its a good way to keep the story going, with just discriptions...I like it! Do write more!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should definately write more... WOW
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why add plot to perfectly good smut?!?!?! good fic! please continue...
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you\'ve written Harry\'s really broken (lack of) thought processes. You have a couple of typos in the text so you might want to consider asking someone to beta for you. You should definately write more though, this is good:)
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely continue! It doesn't have to be plot. Just more smut, another chapter. :D
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes. plz write more
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes you should write more! I've never read anything with this style before. I love it!!