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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
incredible. usually stories dont get me to physically react but this one did.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will update this one. aff.net is not down anymore.
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this!! Looks like I have a few more chapters to read!
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoOo i liked it! It was very hot!
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
soooo hot!i actually had to go in the bathroom at work, and you know(blush) keep it up!
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - THANK YOU for leaving out Lucius! This chapter was fun. I'm a little surprised he didn't give her a contraceptive or heal up her knife and whip wounds, but maybe Hermione is smart enough to do that on her own. BTW, is Voldemort already dead in this story? (I.e., is Lucius still a Death Eater or did he turn out to be a good guy after the war?)
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree -- the darker he is the better he is.
Great fic but I have a small complaint. I don't mean to be a grammar nazi, and your story is literate and well written, but it's "knew" and not "new, and "know" and not "no". As in "She knew better" and "know-it-all".
Otherwise, more dark menacing Snapey please!
Great fic but I have a small complaint. I don't mean to be a grammar nazi, and your story is literate and well written, but it's "knew" and not "new, and "know" and not "no". As in "She knew better" and "know-it-all".
Otherwise, more dark menacing Snapey please!
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I love this fic! Please update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
VERY kinky . . .
But interesting.
Another chapter would certainly be in order . . .
VERY kinky . . .
But interesting.
Another chapter would certainly be in order . . .
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fix your formatting this is bloody awful.... coulcould you expect someone to scroll for every line? Oh hell no