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for Beg for me

by PartyInMyPants

schedule April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I agree that any enraged comments are ridiculous, since you clearly have it marked appropriately. Very hot story, although the spelling errors, especially "new" instead of "knew", are distracting.
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please do add more chapters. You said at first only a One shot then you might add just another one. So how many are we to expect ? This is a great story, don't stop there, but PLEASE DO HURRY WITH THE REST !!
We are starving for more!
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked it tho i think i would have prefferred it without Lucius but thats just my personal prefference, it was still well written though.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person 0HSNAPtheresa
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing. i just love sexual torture. :]
person drool
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... He is so sexy, Dark snape is so sexy!!
I wish he will make me beg, because I know I will do a good job!
Keep up the good work, and looking forward to read all of your other stories!
person Krissy Tina
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its a very good story :) very...ermm...original i would say hehehee. Dont see how it would offend anyone.... dont like, dont read :D hahaha. Im proud of u hunni keep it up :D xxxx
person moi
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish you knew the difference between "new" and "knew" and "no" and "know." I'm half-surprised you did not resort to "u" for "you" and "4" for "for."
person Dylan
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. For only two hours work, that was some chapter.
Great job.